It's Obscene

[hmmnmm]

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[WickedEve]

But why do I look?
it disturbs and makes me feel... things.
It's brazen and you should be ashamed
making me look, turn away, look again
so call it obscene,
I already want it

What things?

 

[poppy1963]

What things?

I'll bet whatever they are...they feel like shades of flushed rose or crimson rubies.

 

[hmmnmm]

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[sophieloves]

But why do I look?
it disturbs and makes me feel... things.
It's brazen and you should be ashamed
making me look, turn away, look again
so call it obscene,
I already want it

no
i wont call it obscene
seen it, wanted it
a stroll through the dark park of your mind

 

[poppy1963]

You are a brave man for trying...I'll give ya that.....good luck.

 

[hmmnmm]

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[wildsweetone]

But why do I look?
it disturbs and makes me feel... things.
It's brazen and you should be ashamed
making me look, turn away, look again
so call it obscene,
I already want it

you know... this quote could go in Senna Jawa's poetry challenge for this month.




and on other matters...

for me it's been scary to delve deep sometimes. scary and exhilarating. it's worth having a go at pushing any self-imposed boundaries though. definitely.

 

[4degrees]

old obscenity.

the
earnestness
of the
affluent
euphoria
derived
solely
from the
enactment
of my
forcible
consumption
is
obscene
in itself.

~2004.

 

[sophieloves]

Dark parks!
Not here, not this mind.
It's all clear and clean
and lit... no dark places,
no, I won't look... there.

where light meets objects
there you will find shadows
even if it's only your own

and look over there -
a bulb flickers
off - on - off again
shadows leap!

 

[poppy1963]

it is the shadow clones
no shadows leap the keep
the clones scrape bones
hmmnmm is smart not to sleep...

don't LOOK there...obscene
is mean & nasty gross
no sheen serene & clean
Go...take the extra dose now...

 

[hmmnmm]

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[RhymeFairy]

Have you no shame? It's improper
I say. To look, think, of the mere
possibility of touch-ing.

I know you say, just once. One small
dip, into the erotic taste of th-at.
But dare not, for I

watch. When the sun is high, clouds hang
dark and the moon tells her stories
of other ones. Such innocent

mortals with morals as pure, as yours.
Those who too soon passed, from this world
to there, within the bl-ink, of an obscene eye ~

 

[hmmnmm]

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[UnderYourSpell]

Give me the darkness where obscenity wanders,
spiderlings creeping under deep lichen stones.
No moon to glitter on blood drenched fangs
as I slither to meet my forbidden destiny.
Beware all ye that dare to enter the stench
of my underworld caverns, even now preparing,
with jet black wings to launch upon the unwary
maiden in her lily white bed, the nightmare,
the phallus of horror imbedded deep within.
Reaching down to devour your deepest soul
seeding unspeakable madness, her eyes no
longer seeing life, feeling only degradation.

 

[poppy1963]

An obscene dose?
An obscene pill?

an obscene pill so close to bitter
but some can make a bitter batter better
dontchaknow! *nods nods* I seek
the gods and they find me. Obscenity

in motion...such devotion to the dose.
Now that was close...I am morose now.
but how? I played the cards so shrewd
perhaps my (in)visiblity was skewed? Oh dear...

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

Obscenity, profanity, hidden idenity
immorality, activity, anonimity
atrocity, calamity, perverted religiosity
diversity, exclusivity, frivolity
insatiablity, liability, moral monstrosity.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Goes to digest dictionary ... burp! .. oh pardon me !!

 

[poppy1963]

Just had to complete the verses....

an obscene pill so close to bitter
but some can make a bitter batter better
dontchaknow! *nods nods* I seek
the gods and they find me. Obscenity

in motion...such devotion to the dose.
Now that was close...I am morose now.

but how? I played the cards so shrewd
perhaps my (in)visiblity was skewed? Oh dear...

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Your played them closely to your chest
and thus stuck out beyond the rest ...

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Ooops *You

 

[hmmnmm]

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[poppy1963]

Your played them closely to your chest
and thus stuck out beyond the rest ...

lol! Cute av...and....aNOTHER Nov. 30th birthday! There's a run on 'em this year... I know 3 people here now (that I know of) with Nov. 30th birthdays! Probably more but I don't know about them.

So many obscene suggestions leave these response mechanisms powerless

This group scares you doesn't it....

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Goodness don't know why it said November 30th ... perhaps it sets it for you because I hadn't at all ... have put it right now I hope .. otherwise I can have two birthdays this year as long as I don't add on another year

 

[hmmnmm]

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