It's my first time posting and I'd love feedback

[DanaGordon]

Hello community. I published a story yesterday and would love to get some feedback. It's a fan-fiction about The Office. I've always seen Pam Beesly as a character ripe for sexual exploration. This first chapter is simply setting the stage, and mostly was published to see if there is any interest around this forum in Pam based literature. I submitted a second chapter as well, which is longer and much more thorough. Still, I'd love to talk to anyone who might be interested.

Here's the link to the story: https://www.literotica.com/s/pams-empty-nest-ch-01