ISO Female POV/Editor for CD/TG story

[butterflyjamie84]

I have written a story involving a crossdressing man who is magically turned into a woman and the sex-capades that follow along with some of the emotional toil of being removed from family. I am looking for an editor to look at the grammar and the punctuation but also to help me with some critique of the feelings, language and descriptions of things that the female character has and explains.

I am looking for a female due to the very descriptive nature of the story and would like it to be as physically accurate as possible.

If a male would like to read it and help with the grammar that would be fine, but I still would like a females POV.

the story is roughly 20pgs in MSWord.

Thank you

 

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[sr71plt]

I have written a story involving a crossdressing man who is magically turned into a woman and the sex-capades that follow along with some of the emotional toil of being removed from family. I am looking for an editor to look at the grammar and the punctuation but also to help me with some critique of the feelings, language and descriptions of things that the female character has and explains.

I am looking for a female due to the very descriptive nature of the story and would like it to be as physically accurate as possible.

If a male would like to read it and help with the grammar that would be fine, but I still would like a females POV.

the story is roughly 20pgs in MSWord.

Thank you

Have to say that I think you really should be looking for this help from a cross-dressing male (not that I could help you). What would a straight woman know about this more than anyone else from off the street? A straight woman's view of a cross-dressing male's perspective wouldn't be legitimate.

 

[butterflyjamie84]

I have turned on private messaging. thank you for the advice

 

[butterflyjamie84]

I am looking for a womans point of view for the aspects of what I describe the female version of the character feeling, seeing and doing as well as the words she chooses to use within the story

 

[sr71plt]

I am looking for a womans point of view for the aspects of what I describe the female version of the character feeling, seeing and doing as well as the words she chooses to use within the story

Doesn't change that she wouldn't be a cross-dressing man, so she couldn't speak for the cross-dressing man's perspective--and a woman's perspective would be irrelevant to a story given through the eyes and emotions of a cross-dressing man. The female version of a cross-dressing man is still a cross-dressing man, not a straight female. But it's your story. Good luck with it. (You've just gotten the first editorial advice on your story--it's certainly up to you whether/how you use it.)

 

[butterflyjamie84]

while I appreciate the advice, you seem to be missing the fact that the character is physically a woman. I am looking for help in the descriptions of how things feel for her, the verbage that she uses, and the things she physically feels.

 

[sr71plt]

I have written a story involving a crossdressing man

Not the way you described your protagonist. And you don't instantly acquire the mental/emotional attributes of a woman just by putting on her clothes or "magically" turning into the woman. Sure you can write it up as a full transformation by magic if you like (and you apparently like) but then you lose all of the tension of your story and any reason to bother to write up that scenario.

I'm not going to argue with you. If a woman wants to buy into this, that's fine with me.