mernie99
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Having successfully posted my first story (currently rated 4.78!) I am encouraged to submit some of the other stories I wrote.
First story: http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=284259
Here's a list of what's written and is ready for editing:
J is for Jerk - Non-Consent - Accountant has conflict with the Network Manager, who blackmails her into sex. (Moral -- Never tell the network manager to fuck off, or he might take it as a literal suggestion.) This one basically needs the grammar check.
Tuna Sub - Erotic Couplings - Woman in loveless marriage hooks up with younger co-worker (who she's had a crush on). It's got a sweet little twist at the end. (Well, all my stories seem to have some sort of a twist.) Yeah, a bit romantic. Go figure. Needs a grammar check.
Seventh Inning Stretch - Erotic Couplings - Attraction in the announcer's booth of a minor league baseball park. Quite innovative story, I think. There are some issues to work out with underage sex (as background). It needs a grammar check. I think it's well developed, but there might be some continuity issues as well.
Would you consider being my editor? ISO someone who can find my grammatical errors. (Probably about 6-12 hiding in each story.) Someone who can catch continuity issues. Someone who can make suggestions to remove text; I do tend to be unnecessarily verbose. Above all, I value honesty and good writing skills.
If you might be willing to do me the favor of editing one of these stories, please let me know. You can PM me or post here.
Or if you would just like to read them, please provide your email addy. I will approve you as my Yahoo 360 friend, where the stories appear in my blog appears (but only to friends.)
First story: http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=284259
Here's a list of what's written and is ready for editing:
J is for Jerk - Non-Consent - Accountant has conflict with the Network Manager, who blackmails her into sex. (Moral -- Never tell the network manager to fuck off, or he might take it as a literal suggestion.) This one basically needs the grammar check.
Tuna Sub - Erotic Couplings - Woman in loveless marriage hooks up with younger co-worker (who she's had a crush on). It's got a sweet little twist at the end. (Well, all my stories seem to have some sort of a twist.) Yeah, a bit romantic. Go figure. Needs a grammar check.
Seventh Inning Stretch - Erotic Couplings - Attraction in the announcer's booth of a minor league baseball park. Quite innovative story, I think. There are some issues to work out with underage sex (as background). It needs a grammar check. I think it's well developed, but there might be some continuity issues as well.
Would you consider being my editor? ISO someone who can find my grammatical errors. (Probably about 6-12 hiding in each story.) Someone who can catch continuity issues. Someone who can make suggestions to remove text; I do tend to be unnecessarily verbose. Above all, I value honesty and good writing skills.
If you might be willing to do me the favor of editing one of these stories, please let me know. You can PM me or post here.
Or if you would just like to read them, please provide your email addy. I will approve you as my Yahoo 360 friend, where the stories appear in my blog appears (but only to friends.)
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