Is this a good beginning?

[Aztek Pagan]

trying to delete

I am trying to delete this thing

 

[sirhugs]

I am trying to delete this thing

how about posting the idea here for comment?

 

[snooper]

Sounds good to me.

Our hero(ine) was sitting at the keyboard, desperately trying to make the delete box work on Lit when the door opened behind (her)him. Hands reach round from behind and grasped ...

Yes, sounds like a good beginning for a story.

 

[delirious39]

I am trying to delete this thing

No not really

 

[MsLinnet]

Sounds good to me.

Our hero(ine) was sitting at the keyboard, desperately trying to make the delete box work on Lit when the door opened behind (her)him. Hands reach round from behind and grasped ...

Yes, sounds like a good beginning for a story.

Well it sounds like a start but what is the goal of the story.

 

[sirhugs]

Well it sounds like a start but what is the goal of the story.

to provide fodder for readers to masturbate, like most Lit tales?

 

[MsLinnet]

to provide fodder for readers to masturbate, like most Lit tales?

you know what I mean mabe goal was not the right word

 

[delirious39]

He's trying to delete something...

I hope it's not something he's going to need later!!

 

[snooper]

He's trying to delete something...

I hope it's not something he's going to need later!!

You remind me of a haiku:

A file that big?
It might be very useful
But now it is gone.

 

[delirious39]

You remind me of a haiku:
.

WHO WAS/IS HAIKU?

 

[ToryonegaoWolf]

Lmao

You remind me of a haiku:

A file that big?
It might be very useful
But now it is gone.

WHO WAS/IS HAIKU?

LOL Haiku is a Japanese form of poetry that uses a certain number of sylables in each line for its format. The three lines there at the end are a Haiku poem.

 

[snooper]

WHO WAS/IS HAIKU?

Seventeen syllables in three lines of five, seven and five respectively.

Having been erased,
The document you're seeking
Must now be retyped.