Hi, this is my first time on the forums, but I've been an off-and-on reader on the site for over 15 years. I've written three stories on here that I'm proud to say have been rated high, which tells me that I did something right, having never written stuff like this before up until two years ago when I wrote my first one.
Anyway, I digress... back to the topic question. I'm in the middle of writing my fourth story, and I'm fearing it might end up being too long because I get carried away with describing things that the reader probably doesn't care about. Do I bother to describe what the bathroom looks like if it's only used in the story for three paragraphs? Do I bother mentioning that my son is wearing a Spiderman shirt when he isn't even mentioned again for the rest of the chapter?
With erotic literature, I'm sure it's safe to assume that most readers only care about one thing in particular, but to me it's important to know the setting as well. But how much is too much?
Thank you,
Jordan
Anyway, I digress... back to the topic question. I'm in the middle of writing my fourth story, and I'm fearing it might end up being too long because I get carried away with describing things that the reader probably doesn't care about. Do I bother to describe what the bathroom looks like if it's only used in the story for three paragraphs? Do I bother mentioning that my son is wearing a Spiderman shirt when he isn't even mentioned again for the rest of the chapter?
With erotic literature, I'm sure it's safe to assume that most readers only care about one thing in particular, but to me it's important to know the setting as well. But how much is too much?
Thank you,
Jordan