starlightqueen
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Oct 18, 2005
- Posts
- 142
Hey Lit editors,
Could any of you spare some time to edit my latest? It's about 5k words and in the same "universe" as the story linked in my sig.
Nothing particularly unusual about it, it'll end up under "Erotic couplings". M/F hookup, focusing on chemistry and a control-of-the-situation dance.
I'm pretty good as far as grammar goes, but I'd like you to be able to catch some of the slips I make.
Mostly, I'm interested to know what parts are hot, what parts could be hotter, and how the pacing is.
Let me know!
Could any of you spare some time to edit my latest? It's about 5k words and in the same "universe" as the story linked in my sig.
Nothing particularly unusual about it, it'll end up under "Erotic couplings". M/F hookup, focusing on chemistry and a control-of-the-situation dance.
I'm pretty good as far as grammar goes, but I'd like you to be able to catch some of the slips I make.
Mostly, I'm interested to know what parts are hot, what parts could be hotter, and how the pacing is.
Let me know!
