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AsylumSeeker
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I edit, but I have had no "training". Let me give you an example of how I edit. Please share how you edit if different.
DRAFT:
Them titties was BIG! And that pussy were HOT!
MY RESPONSE:
[Them titties was - Her breasts were] BIG! And [that pussy were - her pussy was]HOT!
I use red for my suggested changes but I don't know how to replicate colors here. I hope I have provided enough to imply my method of editing. If yours is different please share. If there is a Lit standard, I am your willing pupil.
Thanks in advance.
DRAFT:
Them titties was BIG! And that pussy were HOT!
MY RESPONSE:
[Them titties was - Her breasts were] BIG! And [that pussy were - her pussy was]HOT!
I use red for my suggested changes but I don't know how to replicate colors here. I hope I have provided enough to imply my method of editing. If yours is different please share. If there is a Lit standard, I am your willing pupil.
Thanks in advance.