Is There a Lit Story Here?

[Needlenose]

Last week, we welcomed a new young couple to the neighborhood and one thing led to another. In the middle of my own consummation, I fantasized that I was fucking my best friend's daughter, who is also one of my cybersex partners but now lives 800 miles away.

 

[Carnevil9]

It's a little too streamlined as is. Try adding a few more twists, like maybe some space aliens, roller derby, and a murder mystery.......Carney

 

[Needlenose]

Hey, I'm just the idea man here. If it needs a setting, how about making it at a wedding? None of your suggestions do very much for me....

 

[snooper]

Last week, we welcomed a new young couple to the neighborhood and one thing led to another. In the middle of my own consummation, I fantasized that I was fucking my best friend's daughter, who is also one of my cybersex partners but now lives 800 miles away.

Was the "consummation" with one of the new couple?

 

[Needlenose]

With both of them, actually, then with my wife, and finally, two online ejaculations with my cutie cybersex buddy 4 hours later. Nothing unusual to me about that...I just want to know if this is a story worthy of writing up by someone for publication at Lit. ???

 

[Guest]

Last week, we welcomed a new young couple to the neighborhood and one thing led to another. In the middle of my own consummation, I fantasized that I was fucking my best friend's daughter, who is also one of my cybersex partners but now lives 800 miles away.

Story?

Hell. Sounds like a series.

 

[Guest]

It's a little too streamlined as is. Try adding a few more twists, like maybe some space aliens, roller derby, and a murder mystery.......Carney

Coffee spew.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Hey, I'm just the idea man here. If it needs a setting, how about making it at a wedding? None of your suggestions do very much for me....

Nor me.
I think they're way too over the top, although a twist would be nice.
Since we are talking Internet, my mind turns to spam, malware/worm, keyloggers, and popup Flash windows.

 

[Needlenose]

Sweetsub -
The more I think about it, it could even be an epic autobiographical novel.
Fantasies -
Adding a twist of Internet Incest might be nice, perhaps?

 

[Guest]

Sweetsub -
The more I think about it, it could even be an epic autobiographical novel.
Fantasies -
Adding a twist of Internet Incest might be nice, perhaps?

Far too much information for one simple Lit story.

Go for the novel!

 

[Fantasies_only]

Far too much information for one simple Lit story.

Go for the novel!

I don't know, if told right, it could work.
I have seen similar stuff here as well, but having an uknown voyeur (Via keylogger) along for the ride, puts a new spin on it.

 

[Needlenose]

I'm a reader, masturbator and a fucker, not a writer. You write it!
(Hugs!!!)

 

[Carnevil9]

I'm a reader, masturbator and a fucker, not a writer. You write it!
(Hugs!!!)

Yes, but the pen is mightier than the pork-sword.

 

[Guest]

Yes, but the pen is mightier than the pork-sword.

Second coffee spew.



Damn - that's sig-line worthy, CE.