Is my story crap?

[Wyatt]

Hi All,I would appreciate an opinion on a story I wrote last December.I received little feedback.(Two one liners).If any other author/reader would tell me A)Don't give up the day job or B)Nice try,I would be chuffed.Any comments at all.The story is in Loving Wives and is entitled Paula:the girl who couldn't say no. Cheers Wyatt
wyatt@literotica.org

[Moved to Story Feedback forum by Weird Harold]

[Edited by Weird Harold on 05-16-2001 at 11:52 AM]

 

[nitengale]

Ohhhh Wyatt....

Take your question, and the link to your story and head for the Story Feedback corale...we like a sense of order on this here ranch!!

And then we'll see about reading it to get ya some feedback!

Thanks!