Is it ok?

[gauchecritic]

Well thank you all again, I'm glad to see I'm not breaking the bleeding edge or whatever it is that they call it these days. New to me and I'm quite enjoying it.

I shall send it soon as, Sweet. (but it's really disgusting incest though)

 

[wildsweetone]

Well thank you all again, I'm glad to see I'm not breaking the bleeding edge or whatever it is that they call it these days. New to me and I'm quite enjoying it.

I shall send it soon as, Sweet. (but it's really disgusting incest though)

writing is writing. gauche stories are gauche stories.

 

[gauchecritic]

Done and done. Finished last night and it was posted this morning. Rding Home For Christmas.

I actually really enjoyed writing it using the different PoVs but I was in serious danger of missing the deadline altogether when I introduced a second Third person scene. (If you get my drift)

By way of prostitution I just thought I'd let those that read or answered in this thread that I was done.

The main premise was taken from the Story Ideas thread (for which I gave whole credit in a pre-amble) although I'm pretty sure it wasn't what the idea guy had in mind.

Thanks all once again.