is anyone interested in finishing a femdom story?

[32199]

Although I have a story idea and wrote the first installment of the story, the second installment was rejected. Due to insufficient story development.

Since I am not a gifted writer like most of the Lit authors, I thought I would post to see if anyone would like to pick up the story and finish it?

If anyone is interested I would be happy to post an outline and the second installment that was rejected as a rough draft. The outline would include femdom, humilation in the form of CFNM, forced masturbation, forced bi-sex,creampie eating, etc.

Here is the first installment:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=78002

 

[Jenny _S]

Although I have a story idea and wrote the first installment of the story, the second installment was rejected. Due to insufficient story development.

Since I am not a gifted writer like most of the Lit authors, I thought I would post to see if anyone would like to pick up the story and finish it?

If anyone is interested I would be happy to post an outline and the second installment that was rejected as a rough draft. The outline would include femdom, humilation in the form of CFNM, forced masturbation, forced bi-sex,creampie eating, etc.

Here is the first installment:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=78002

32199,
Most of us are not gifted writers. I've read your first installment and it isn't that bad for an early effort. There are some things you could do to jazz it up.

Writing is a learning experience. The only experience you will ever get is by writing, looking at the feedback and, over time, going back and looking at earlier work and seeing what you are doing now that you didn't know then. Don't be discouraged. Everyone has a story rejected now and again, especially why you are just starting out. (I had two rejected right off.)

Would you really be happy having someone else write your story now that you've cut your teeth on part one? I doubt it. So, grit your teeth and give it another try. If it's anything like the first story it will be worth it.

 

[BlackSnake]

Just practice. That's all I've been doing.

Think what your story is about. Not the detail, but sum it up in a sentence or two: A man fucks is sister-in-law after being caught spying on her.

Your entire story is wrapped up in that simple sentence (actually a complex sentence).

What happened first: The man is curious, so he deside to take a little peek.

You have a bit of conflict: It's his brother's wife and he gains a great desire for her, but he can't have her.

The climax: She catches him in the act, but she knows he'd been looking all time, and she too has a desire for him, and they fuck.

The falling action: The brother knows about the affair and is the one who setup the situation. All is well

Now the hard part which takes practice: Write the details being very descriptive. Give the reader the sence that they are wittinessing what is happening.

Master that and I believe you will be one of the greatest story tellers of all times.

 

[Jenny _S]

Hmmm

Just practice. That's all I've been doing.

Think what your story is about. Not the detail, but sum it up in a sentence or two: A man fucks is sister-in-law after being caught spying on her.

Your entire story is wrapped up in that simple sentence (actually a complex sentence).

What happened first: The man is curious, so he deside to take a little peek.

You have a bit of conflict: It's his brother's wife and he gains a great desire for her, but he can't have her.

The climax: She catches him in the act, but she knows he'd been looking all time, and she too has a desire for him, and they fuck.

The falling action: The brother knows about the affair and is the one who setup the situation. All is well

Now the hard part which takes practice: Write the details being very descriptive. Give the reader the sence that they are wittinessing what is happening.

Master that and I believe you will be one of the greatest story tellers of all times.

That's a good way to put it, BlackSnake... The only thing I would add is go the the "How Too..." and "Author's Resource" catagories and start reading. Learn to let your characters describe what's going on. And above all... SHOW the reader... don't TELL the reader.

Then you'll be a winner.