Intruder

[Guest]

Hi i'm looking to play out a fantasy with a nasty intruder who takes more than money when he.....or she finds this sweet little thing home all alone and scared......maybe my little sister or my mom could show up a little bit later

Anyone wanna play? Cum and hurt me

 

[Hornytoad]

Intruder:

I had been scoping out this house for a while. The family was pretty rich. The man of the house was always out, and he had a nice wife and two nice daughters. I waited one night and saw the wife's car and one of the daughter's car's leave. I decided this was the night when I was going to make my move.

It was late at night and still the two cars had not returned. I made my away around to the back of the house and came in thrugh the back door. I opened my bag and started putting stuff in. All the nice art and pottery.

Next, I made my way up to the second floor. I went in the first bedroom and took the diamonds and other fine jews and put them in my bag. As I was moving toward the next bedroom, I heard the shower turn on.

"Shit," I thought to myself she's still up. I think I'm going to have to do something about this. I walk towards the bathroom with the shower on...

 

[Guest]

Home Alone

*OOC not quite the set up I was looking for but it'll do *

Mom and Stephanie both invited me to go out with them. Mom just doesn't like the thought of my being home alone. Times like this when Daddy goes out of town on business she tends to get a bit nervous. *SIGH* Parents, *laugh* she means well though so I appreciate that.

Still, I wasn't in the mood to go out....having broken up with Chris I just wanted sometime alone for a while. Chris is a nice guy and I really care about him a lot, but I'm just not ready to go all the way, with him or with anyone.

Stephanie tried to convice me to come out with her and a couple of friends, out enjoying her new car, her present for graduating. She's just a couple of years younger than me but still very nieve in some ways.....she's a sweet little thing though

I've settled in, doing some reading and listening to some music, relaxing on a quiet night. I slipped off to sleep, waking up later than i'd planned on being up. Oh well, I don't have to be up early tomorrow, maybe I'll take a nice relaxing bath before going to bed..........

 

[Hornytoad]

I walked into the bathroom and saw the older daughter taking a bath. She's fallen asleep in the bubbles and doesn't even relize that I'm there. I reach down and wrap my hand around her mouth. I wrap my other arm around her waist and drag her out of the tub.

As I drag her back to a bedroom, she starts waking up. I squeeze tightly around her mouth and say "Say a word and your dead."

I drag her to the bed and tie her up. I look through her drawers and find a whip and a gag. I take them and and gag her. Than I...

 

[Guest]

*OOC No whip or gag sorry, i'm a good girl remember so don't get any ideas There's plenty of things you can make good use of though, just use your imagination

Sliding into the soft bubbles it wasn't long before I was asleep......as I feel the hand over my mouth and feel my body being lifted from the tub I think first that i'm dreaming.....I must be dreaming.

Slowly the fog starts to clear and I realize i'm not dreaming.....oh god what's happening....lifted from the tub, hard hands on my naked body pulling me towards the bedroom. I struggle but he just squeezes tighter....it is a "he" it has to be I can tell by his hands.....OH GOD What's happening?!?

I try to scream but I can't. He throws me roughly to the bed, his weight hard against me, holding me down. His hand moves and I try to scream but it's cut off as he shoves something in my mouth to gag me.

For the first time he speaks telling me not to scream. I whimper softly, my body trembling, tears filling my eyes....

 

[Hornytoad]

OOC: You can continue the story instead of just repeating what I write from your point of view

 

[Guest]

why do you even bother?

 

[forgetunome]

Just a thought...

Hi i'm looking to play out a fantasy with a nasty intruder who takes more than money when he.....or she finds this sweet little thing home all alone and scared......maybe my little sister or my mom could show up a little bit later

Anyone wanna play? Cum and hurt me

I don't have any experience writing any role plays to speak of but....maybe (this is meant to be constructive...) you should have laid out some rules, or had an outline as to what you were looking for specifically. Your post leaves it pretty open as to whoever responds wants to interpret it. The reference to a "nasty intruder" would imply to me that there is going to be some brutality maybe??? Anyway just my thoughts...probably not worth a lot but, I'd like to see your story continue and I think if you have a definite idea as to how you want the story to go there should be an outline and rules as to what you won't go for. *s* Okay now I'll get off of my soapbox. *stepping off soapbox* stubs my toe *Ouch* Well that's what I get for being preachy!