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Actually, my stories.
My story "Breaking Rebecca" is new today, and I was hoping to get some thoughts about it, especially the pacing. It's obviously the first part of a longer story, but it didn't feel true to the whole thing if I hit things too fast in the first installment....
Thanks for your thoughts!
Actually, my stories.
My story "Breaking Rebecca" is new today, and I was hoping to get some thoughts about it, especially the pacing. It's obviously the first part of a longer story, but it didn't feel true to the whole thing if I hit things too fast in the first installment....
Thanks for your thoughts!
