Interuptions by Mistress Jorja

[daughter]

This poem has bite. Sassy with style. The repetition is just right and keeps the reader focused. Good job on crafting a sophisticated metaphor. Imagery is solid. This poet is past abstractions. Uh, no. She knows how to strut-- Illustration with a capital I. No expository writing here. Mistress pens a good read with style, skill and focus. Nothing bittersweet about this poem.

A must read:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=28127

Kudos, poet.

Peace,

daughter

 

[Mistress Jorja]

A quick note of thanks...

...to let you know your comments are much appreciated *grins*...

and to let you know that I've been enjoying your poems as well.

xoxo,
Jorja

 

[daughter]

You're welcome

Mistress--

It's all good. Thank you.

Peace,

daughter