Interesting idea...
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I think I'll pass on this one, but for interest's sake, in what context? That request is too vague to be worked on. It is no different than saying "Please write a story about a lesbian."
What is it you want to see; Straight boy seduction? Chasing women? Three way action? Her hiding her secret from the boyfriend? What is it that excites you about TG/TV tales? The more detail you give, the better someone can write your story.
Help the potentional author out, and give him some bones to flesh out ...
Regards,
-T
What is it you want to see; Straight boy seduction? Chasing women? Three way action? Her hiding her secret from the boyfriend? What is it that excites you about TG/TV tales? The more detail you give, the better someone can write your story.
Help the potentional author out, and give him some bones to flesh out ...
Regards,
-T
ther01077 said:
Shemale gangbang ...
Consensual or n/c? If n/c, should she begin to enjoy it? Were the guys out to rape a woman, and surprised, or was the TV the target all along?
Hmm. I assumed they were male! (Maybe you said 'guys' the way I often say 'people' or 'folks.') Perhaps they are female, and the gangbang is less about sex than it is about humiliation?
Any preference as to time period? (60's - today) or location? How about attitudes? Homophobic or tolerant?
Should we use more elevated, proper language and diction, or blue collar street slang? Any preference on race/income level?
Just a few questions to get the ideas flowing. I think that this is the first TG/TV request I've seen here. Although I'm unqualified to write such a tale (never have before!) I'm interested in seeing what you picture the story as being. Hell, perhaps this will be a good way to try my hand at something new.
Cheers!
-T
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julian 1 said:
Thanks for the compliment, Julian 1! I know how much I needed help when I first started writing. As a matter of fact, my first story posted at lit went up w/o being looked over by an editor. I sent out three requests, but no responses came back. The last story I had edited did get looked over, but was corrected for minutiae, not content. I can catch most of the punctuation and spelling errors myself. The biggest problems -- pacing, structure and mood -- went uncommented on.
Since that story I've never submitted to an editor again. I read my material over until I'm sick of doing so, then I post it. A lot of small errors still creep into my work. I'm mildly dyslexic, and the/teh, this/thsi and other inversion mistakes crop up in my writing all the time. WordPerfect's autocorrect catches most of them, but not all of them.
Anyways, I'm glad my feedback helps somebody. I'd love to get some on my own stories sometime. (Nudge, nudge!)
Cheers!
-T
perhaps a little help
I'm a former Assoc. Professor of Philosophy. I would be
willing to give your work a critique if you're interested
and request a similar service from you, as well.I like
the comprehensiveness of your approach; setting the
historicity of the scenario and examining the mind
set of the characters involved.
I'm a former Assoc. Professor of Philosophy. I would be
willing to give your work a critique if you're interested
and request a similar service from you, as well.I like
the comprehensiveness of your approach; setting the
historicity of the scenario and examining the mind
set of the characters involved.
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Tatewaki said:
Careful, T. Some people may start a thread bitching about you next.
lolTiggs said:Careful, T. Some people may start a thread bitching about you next.
Well I know it! I hope I can deal with them with style and panache as you have. More likely, I'll just grin and bear it. I have pressing problems and issues in real life; bickering with strangers on bulletin boards don't qualify as stress.
Nice seeing you around, by the way! Were you out livin' life, unlike us Forum Trolls?
Warmest,
-T
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Tatewaki said:
I was off writing!
I added a bit more detail to a "fantasy" e-mail I sent a friend a while back, and even submitted it to Lit. It's a bit shorter than I'd like, but as I told Lex, I'm not going to add length for the sole purpose of adding length. Readers can tell if the writer is bored. It'll show through in the text.And, I was off having a WONDERFUL time with my wonderful, sexy, loving, funny Boyfriend. I had a week of paradice with Him!!
And, I'll get Him again at the beginning of May, and by summer He'll be moving here! So, needless to say, I've been too busy to entertain the few who bitch about me.
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