Rhys
the once and future
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- Dec 14, 2001
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Following the comments Killermuffin has made regarding feedback, I would like to recomend a story. At the moment, I am having a block on the author, but the story is called Intensely Purple, and its located in the fetish section.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=32121
This story is very well written. While the "voice" of the story is an objective observer, this works well within the context. Also, this is one of the more focused stories I have read, with no extra verbage. The author also makes excellent word choices: very descriptive and flowing. I rarely download a story directly to my computer but I did so for this one, simply because I have re-read it several times and picked up new nuances each time.
I hope to see more of this author on the board.
Rhys
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=32121
This story is very well written. While the "voice" of the story is an objective observer, this works well within the context. Also, this is one of the more focused stories I have read, with no extra verbage. The author also makes excellent word choices: very descriptive and flowing. I rarely download a story directly to my computer but I did so for this one, simply because I have re-read it several times and picked up new nuances each time.
I hope to see more of this author on the board.
Rhys
I have a mouse "floater" tonight and its not allowing me to click real well. I guess I'll have to take it apart and clean it...:-( I'd have gone back and found the authors name but for that.
