Inspired by dark angel

[MsLinnet]

Ok this is not anything to do with the TV series except I was looking at some pictures of Jessica Alba when this idea came to me. A powerful woman both mentally and physically is put into a situation that her body her life and those that she loves is in danger and she has to risk all to save them and must do anything to get her life back or dose she?
Anyway this is what I have as an opening any comments are welcome…

Love MsLinnet.

She walked into the bar and heads turn, her leathers are skin tight and show her curves are her own and hers is the body she was born with not artificially created like so many women in this day.

Her name is Kate and at 5 foot 6 is built to perfection her black wavy hair caresses her shoulders emphasizing her facial features her deep blue eyes seem to cut through the smoke haze that is in the bar room she gets to the counter and chuck the barman has her glass on the bar and is poring her usual shot of Glenmorangie over ice as she always had it. “Have you seen him?” Kate asked. Chuck said nothing but looked over to the back room door where you could bet on anything and use anything as a stake.

“Another one.” Kate said, as she slammed the empty glass on the bar.
“Kate I don’t want any trouble he said he was only watching.” Chuck said as he poured the golden liquid over what remained of the ice.

Kate picked up the glass and walked over to the door where she knew Patrick would be gambling away there life once more. Two men blocked her way telling her that she could not pass. “Chuck get these two goons out of my face I have come for my property and I am not leaving with out it.”

“They don’t work for me they work for the Blackman, he is in there.” Kate looked at the two thugs they where both twice her size but she didn’t care her goal was to get through the door and they were in her way, she turned her back to them and knocked back the whisky in her glass throwing the empty glass high into the air. Then performing a perfect round house kick to the larger of the men’s head, Kate knocked the brute man through the flimsy door.

The second man stepped across in front of the gaping hole in the wall just as the glass came down and Kate caught it as if it was a feather floating into her hand. As the glass rested in her small hand her fist and glass flew through the air hard into the groin of the man, closely followed by her foot catching him under the chin almost taking his head off his shoulders.

 

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Interesting opening, I actually find myself wondering what happens next so good start.

 

[MsLinnet]

Interesting opening, I actually find myself wondering what happens next so good start.

I think thats my point not sure what is going to happen but I am open to sugestions.

 

[emap]

We should get black over here, he's good at this stuff.

I'm to hungry to think of anything right now really, I'll have to get back to you on it.

 

[MsLinnet]

ok part 2

Kate walked into the dingy backroom, sure enough there was her brother sat at a card table with 4 other scumbags from around town, and at the far end of the table was the Blackman, this nickname was a strange one as the Blackman was actually white, an albino devoid of any pigment in his skin, white hair and eyes that showed no emotion just an intense stair that made anyone nervous. From all the stories about him that emerged in the forms of urban legends the one that made the most sense was that he was born of black parents and was shunned by his family as a demon. He left on a rubbish dump at a month old; there by chance he was found by a vagrant woman who raised him on the streets. At sixteen his life changed the woman who had cared for him died while going through her meagre belongings he found two things one was a letter from some solicitor firm from uptown telling her about dividends on stocks and a letter from a private investigator that identified who his real family was then one night they all were found dead from his grandparents to his younger siblings making him alone again. The Blackman showed them no mercy and that had been his trait all the rest of his life, if you owe the Blackman you paid one way or another regardless of how.

“Hello Kate I had been expecting you all you had to do was knock.” The Blackman said as the two goon’s that were supposed to be guarding the door got them selves up off the floor nursing there wounds as well as there pride.

“Get out!” The Blackman told the goons, and they did pulling what was left of the door shut as hey left the room.

“What’s it going to take?” Kate asked. The Blackman just looked at her saying nothing his eyes undressing her as them scanned her leather clad body.

“Kate I am winning I am up ten grand look I am winning.” Kate knew that it would be only a matter of time when the tables would turn against her brother the Blackman never cheated when gambling but he always played the odds and his wealth and power in the neighbourhood meant he eventually got his way. Kate was an object of desire for him and he wanted her as a plaything he had asked her to work for him on many occasions but the terms of the deal were never to Kate’s liking so she had always rebuffed his advances.

“Come on we are leaving.” Kate ordered and in embarrassment her little brother got up from the table laying down what he thought was going to be another winning hand, he went to grab the pot but the Blackman slapped his cane down across the wrists of the youngster saying not this hand laying down a full house that beat his hand overwhelmingly.

“Till next time Kate.” Kate just looked at him and the cards on the table picked up the remainder of her brothers winnings and pushed him towards the door. “Go pay for my drink while I have a chat with your benefactor.”

“Leave him alone it is not him you want it is me is it not and there is no way I am going to work for you in any capacity so leave my family alone.”

“It was him that came looking for the game I am not his keeper there is five grand on this table you can add it to your brothers takings by working for me just once all you have to do is dance for me once ten minutes and it is yours, what do you say Kate.” Kate looked at the pile of money and then at the scumbags around the table.

“You want me to dance for you and these degenerates.” She said pulling on the zip on the front of her leathers showing off more of her tender flesh and the roundness of her breasts. “Yes that is all and its all yours.” The Blackman said thinking he was to have his way finally. “Not until heel freezes over.” Pulling her zip back up and turning to leave the room. The Blackman hurled his arms up in the air, in doing so he overturned the card table sending the pile of cash into the air. Kate turned as he took a step towards her she could see that he was angered the first sign of any emotion he had ever shown in her presence, Kate just stood her ground as he grabbed her leather clad breasts. She let him have his grope and then took the thumb of one of his hands and bent it down until he was on his knees in front of her reeling in pain, she lifted a foot and pushed him making him fall to the floor like the worm he was.

 

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Good so far.

Tell you the truth, I'm not real sure where to go next, kinda hard to have sex in there after that, I was thinking along the lines of maybe sending his goons after her. Of course there could be the friend coming into the bar then needing to talk to her, they go into the ladies room and things heat up between them.

Hmmm, in the middle of things getting interesting his goons burst into the room putting an end to their almost fun. Maybe do a long tease on getting with the friend, before they do finally get together.

 

[BlackSnake]

I like this kind of action sex adventure type story.

Kate wins that round and walks out, gather brother, and leaves. Her victory is only temporary. A few days later, her brother is missing. She finds me beaten and in debt to the Blackman. Kate is impulsive and charges into the Blackman's lair. The Blackman is waiting. Kate is caught off guard by the Blackman's hinchmen. The beat her serverely before the Blackman arrives and exacts his punishment on her with his cane. He tell her that the terms of payment is her total submissiveness to him or her brother's life. He give her three days to decide, and has his hinchmen to dump her in an alley.

 

[MsLinnet]

I like this kind of action sex adventure type story.

Kate wins that round and walks out, gather brother, and leaves. Her victory is only temporary. A few days later, her brother is missing. She finds me beaten and in debt to the Blackman. Kate is impulsive and charges into the Blackman's lair. The Blackman is waiting. Kate is caught off guard by the Blackman's hinchmen. The beat her serverely before the Blackman arrives and exacts his punishment on her with his cane. He tell her that the terms of payment is her total submissiveness to him or her brother's life. He give her three days to decide, and has his hinchmen to dump her in an alley.

that sounds like a good plan watch this space and i hope this works out