Inspired by a photograph and phone call . ..

[OceanGoddess]

Hi~
I haven't posted in this forum before and I'm not much of a writer, but here goes . . .I was hoping someone would take off with this idea and write it into a story . . .

I was engaged to a Swedish man once upon a time, and we have kept in touch over the years since we broke up. He went to South Africa last month and while he was there (he was there alone), he called me on his cell phone while he was having an INCREDIBLE meal in a restaurant overlooking the ocean . . .we both wished I could have been there .. .anyway, he had the waiter take a photo of him there and he emailed it to me when he returned home.

I wrote this little paragraph while looking at the photo of him at the ocean's edge . ..

"At a table having dinner in a seaside restaurant in Cape Town, South Africa . ..the full lush moon rising over the ocean . . .the sounds of the wild sea . . .tasting the honeyed lips of my lover, the mix of wine, silky sweetness of dessert, the voluptuous sultry taste of port . . .his strong tanned arms around me . . .taking a slow stroll along the water's edge, stopping to kiss and look into his dark chocolate eyes, soon we are skin to skin~kissing each other tenderly . . .with increasing anticipation and eagerness."

He was in South Africa for a mountain biking race .. . and he also confided in me that when he was up on a mountain overlooking the sea, he also was fantasizing about us up there, with him entering me from behind while we both faced the sea .. .we both have an obsession with the ocean.

So . . .anyone care to elaborate?

 

[J_River]

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[OceanGoddess]

I am overwhelmed.

Thank you. I am almost speechless, which is a rarity for me. I adore the story and thank you for writing it.

 

[BedtimeStories]

 

[Roadieeeeeee]

I like the idea. Go f'rit!

I like the idea of your story, and I'd encourage you to develop it. I like the ideas of using technology to enjoy fabulous people you'd never otherwise know even exist!

Roadie

 

[emap]

Bedtime j_river posted a story or a link to a story then took it off.

Incredibly rude of him, I would like to read it to after all.

 

[OceanGoddess]

I love J River's story, but if anyone else would like to elaborate on my paragraph, that would be great!

 

[emap]

What he told me about the story in a PM, just well wow. I couldn't do anything near that, but it did give me a thought for a slightly altered version.

He's in South Africa eating dinner in the restaurant talking to her on the phone, sends her a picture and spends most of the dinner seducing her over the phone. He does such a great job of that she flies to South Africa post haste, except he's already left for a bicycle journey along the coast. She gets a bike herself and pedals madly to catch him, which she does atop a mountain overlooking the ocean, where they engage in passionate sex.

Sadly I can't do this for a bit yet, and doubt I could get it as good as I'm thinking it should be but I may actually give it a shot at a later date.

 

[OceanGoddess]

Love It!

Oh emap, that sounds lovely and something I might actually do . . .hopping a plane and traveling for hours and hours and several airplane changes to get to him. This would also incorporate the fantasy he had on that mountaintop whilst he was actually there.

 

[BedtimeStories]

Bedtime j_river posted a story or a link to a story then took it off.

Incredibly rude of him, I would like to read it to after all.

Yes... I've since been updated on the goings on here.

 

[emap]

Me to, actually an ongoing conversation.

I'm glad you liked it ocean, and I would dearly love to see it submitted, not neccessarily by me.

 

[gottis]

Oh emap, that sounds lovely and something I might actually do . . .hopping a plane and traveling for hours and hours and several airplane changes to get to him. This would also incorporate the fantasy he had on that mountaintop whilst he was actually there.

Hello OceanGoddess

 

[OceanGoddess]

Hello Gottis.

 

[gottis]

Hello Gottis.

How are you doing? I'm from Sweden. Do you like Sweden?
Did you know "gottis" means candy/something very good, in some parts of Sweden?

 

[OceanGoddess]

Yes, I'm very familiar with what "gottis" means . . .but thank you for making sure I know it means something very , very, good. . .