Input Request for a Brother-Sister Story

[Braindard]

Hi All,

I'm looking for some help with a story I'm working on.

To give background: the story revolves around a beautiful young girl, Nicole, and her two brothers. The relationships between Nicole and each brothers are intended to remain equal, and both brothers will escalate to sex with her knowing that the other is doing the same. The boys bond early on about their attraction to their little sister and things go from there.

I would like to explore a storyline where the brothers end up watching some of each other's interactions with Nicole, without turning it into an all out fuckfest. She is inexperienced, and the boys want her to experience sex slowly, intimately, and likely one on one for the majority of the tale.

I have Nicole plan it so the boys must compete for who gets to show her the ropes in a couple key stages of escalation. In the first big scene, one brother is sent on an errand while Nicole jerks the winning brother off as his prize; he ends up returning the favor. I was thinking that I would have the errand-running brother would come back as his younger brother removes sisters bottoms and gets down to it.

So the question: How involved does the second brother get? Does he stay in the shadows until it's all over? Does he make himself known and then tell them to continue? (maybe sis likes having him watch) Or, does he not get back in time at all?

The question is important because it will happen a number of times throughout the story where one brother is inherently excluded from the fun, and it would be nice if they could all get along. Again, I'm trying to stay light on the threesome aspect. Those who have read or written this type of content, what are your thoughts? What do you like to see when there's multiple partners?

Side note: Should she be named Nicole or Nicky?

Thanks; I'm really enjoying reading your thoughts now that I've begun digging into this forum.

 

[JayLikestoRead]

I'll address your side question: You could develop the brothers' distinct personalities by establishing that one of them usually calls her Nicky and the other calls her Nicole.

 

[Carnevil9]

I'd have the brothers make a side deal (unbeknownst to the sister) that the non-chosen brother will be watching through a peephole or window or whatever. So the chosen brother always knows they are being watched, but the sister does not. Or maybe she secretly does? Or she discovers it half way through the epic.

Anyway, this enables you to write from multiple perspectives, it keeps all characters engaged, it helps nobody feel like a loser, it emphasizes the "coopetition" aspect of the brothers' relationship, yet it doesn't descend into pure threesome.

And I like the different-brother-different-nickname idea, too.

 

[lovecraft68]

The answer of what is in it for the second brother is obvious... see he is pushing his brother at little sis so...

He can have mom's undivided attention!

 

[Handley_Page]

Such behaviours may well be OK for a 15-year old, but do not forget that at turned
18, attitudes may change.
They got to be over 18. !!

 

[Braindard]

Great ideas! Thanks everyone.

I like the idea of one calling her Nicky and the other Nicole, it adds even more personality to the story. By the time the first scene with any overtly sexual content happens, the boys haven't yet 'decided' that they are going to have sex with their sister. Thus, it wouldnt fit (as I've framed it) for them to make a pact of some sort. But, I think that before things really heat up I could have the brothers talk about what happens when one is not with her.

It sounds like maybe the consensus is that it is somewhat less appealing to have sexual activity going on with one brother just outright watching, which I can understand. I did kind of have this vision of Nicole losing her virginity with her oldest brother holding her hand and 'directing' in a way. Maybe I should let that go?

I'm unlikely to engage mom, that's not an angle I've ever taken because it does little for me personally. And as for the age of the characters, they are 18 or older, no doubt about it.