SecretGuardian
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Hi, the title of the post may be a little strange, but it’s the best I could think of.
I have an idea for writing a story, and I’d like to know if you think it’s a good idea or not, and if you can give me some ideas for improving it.
It’s about a marriage that apparently, for your neighbors, is the perfect marriage. But in reality, the husband is a bastard who treats his wife badly. Sometimes he humiliates her with words and in front of her friends (he doesn’t hit her, but he hurts her psychologically)
You can say he thinks he owns her.
One day, he receives a strange message in his mail to which he cannot respond. It’s about a man telling you that he’s been in love with his wife for many years, and he’s gonna try to take her away.
At first, the MC doesn’t take him seriously because he thinks he owns his wife and doesn’t think she can really be unfaithful to him.
He doesn’t even notice the little changes in his wife, (like she’s smiling more now, or putting on makeup differently)
But a few weeks later, he receives another email from the same man, who tells him that everything is going well and that he almost stole from his wife.
Basically, the idea is that the story develops through these e-mails, where the mysterious man tells him all the details of his relationship with the wife of Mc. Including sex and everything else.
Maybe I could send you pictures and videos too. The protagonist eventually would have no choice but to accept that his wife will leave him, but it is already too late.
Well, that’s the idea.
I’m not sure that’s a good idea, but I would love to read your comments, tips and everything else.
And if anyone thinks they could write a really good story on this one, go ahead.
Anyway, thank you so much for reading.
EDIT: I’m sorry about the strange pronouns. I used a translator because my English is not very good.
I hope you understand what I want to say.
I have an idea for writing a story, and I’d like to know if you think it’s a good idea or not, and if you can give me some ideas for improving it.
It’s about a marriage that apparently, for your neighbors, is the perfect marriage. But in reality, the husband is a bastard who treats his wife badly. Sometimes he humiliates her with words and in front of her friends (he doesn’t hit her, but he hurts her psychologically)
You can say he thinks he owns her.
One day, he receives a strange message in his mail to which he cannot respond. It’s about a man telling you that he’s been in love with his wife for many years, and he’s gonna try to take her away.
At first, the MC doesn’t take him seriously because he thinks he owns his wife and doesn’t think she can really be unfaithful to him.
He doesn’t even notice the little changes in his wife, (like she’s smiling more now, or putting on makeup differently)
But a few weeks later, he receives another email from the same man, who tells him that everything is going well and that he almost stole from his wife.
Basically, the idea is that the story develops through these e-mails, where the mysterious man tells him all the details of his relationship with the wife of Mc. Including sex and everything else.
Maybe I could send you pictures and videos too. The protagonist eventually would have no choice but to accept that his wife will leave him, but it is already too late.
Well, that’s the idea.
I’m not sure that’s a good idea, but I would love to read your comments, tips and everything else.
And if anyone thinks they could write a really good story on this one, go ahead.
Anyway, thank you so much for reading.
EDIT: I’m sorry about the strange pronouns. I used a translator because my English is not very good.
I hope you understand what I want to say.
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