Incubus

[Rimmugýgur]

Just got my first story on literotica approved, and as such would like to milk for comments/views.

Incubus

I am aware of the rather awkward grammatical error in my latin, but I'm too lazy to have it edited. Just mentally rewrite "meus caritas" into "mea caritas". I suck.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

It's a good story, but very brief and almost sketchy. Over alamost as soon as it begins.

I don't know Latin anyhow, so all that stuff was by me.

 

[Hulder]

It's a good story and a good idea behind it. I would have milked the Incubus-title a bit more but that's just me, lol. Slightly twisted, supernatural sex is fun!

Like I said, I think it's a good idea, but the story itself feels little unfinished. As a first submission though, it's not bad at all.


Hugs and Kisses!