Incest/Taboo?

[Virtual_Burlesque]

Now there's a challenge Burley - turn that into erotica!. . .

To begin with, turn she into he, then . . .

*****************************


The body could be found lying deep in the woods. It wasn't cold yet, and no one had seen the killing.

He looked over his shoulder, frozen while he listened. There was neither sight nor sound of a soul nearby.

The body was already dismembered and disembowelled. Around the corpse the bloody remnants lay, as a steamy vapour rose from the beckoning freshly-killed body.

He dropped his pants. Picking up the steaming pig's liver, he thrust himself between inviting folds of a realistically wet and warm organ.

Oh, finally he could begin pumping his haunches in the ritualistic motion.

God in Your Mercy! Thank You for designating torn meat, as well as pork, taboo.

The kosher butcher felt so good getting dirty, again!


****************************

It would probably get straight 1-votes, legitimately!

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

The body could be found lying deep in the woods. It wasn't cold yet, and no one had seen the killing.

He looked over his shoulder, frozen while he listened. There was neither sight nor sound of a soul nearby.

The body was already dismembered and disembowelled. Around the corpse the bloody remnants lay, as a steamy vapour rose from the beckoning freshly-killed body.

He dropped his pants. Picking up the steaming pig's liver, he thrust himself between inviting folds of a realistically wet and warm organ.

Oh, finally he could begin pumping his haunches in the ritualistic motion.

God in Your Mercy! Thank You for designating torn meat, as well as pork, taboo.

The kosher butcher felt so good getting dirty, again!

Burly,

OY!

Rumple Foreskin

 

[yui]

Re: Thanks, everyone

Yui, I think you are cute, but it's hard to tell from less than half a picture. How's this? Well, not as good as the half, I'm afraid.

Wow, that whole picture just isn't very cute, is it? I seem to have a heart-shaped head, very little nose, no chin, and I think my eyes are crossed. Aaiiee! And my hair! I look like the girl who crawled out of the well in "Ringu".

 

[sweetnpetite]

I'm pretty sure for the purpose of Lit, incest/taboo just means 'incest and relationships that are taboo because of family relation, but not tecnically incest for all you nit pickers out there who have been complaining that such and such a story isn't *really* incest.'

Because before the category was just called 'incest' and I remember more than a few theads and questions about if step parent sex counted as incest or second cousins or whatever.

So I *think* that it's just there for the annoyingly literal.

Also, I have a story in Incest that is roll play of daddy/daughter which falls more under the 'taboo' heading as well I suppose. I've seen quite a few of these roll-play incest stories the same way that non-concent has several roll-play or 'suprise it was just a kinki game' at the end stories.

As to this thread, I have no idea why it shouldn't fit as a 'how to' maybe you should have called it 'Howto/writetaboo' who knows!

Good luck on your story.

 

[HornyHenry]

Re: Re: Thanks, everyone

Wow, that whole picture just isn't very cute, is it? I seem to have a heart-shaped head, very little nose, no chin, and I think my eyes are crossed. Aaiiee! And my hair! I look like the girl who crawled out of the well in "Ringu".

Sorry. I only wanted to see the whole you, Yui, so I flipped the one side and melted them together for a challenge exercise. The problem is it is less than 1/2 a picture so part of the middle is missing.
You could fix it by showing us the WHOLE You!


Sweetnpetite, I asked for it to be moved here. I figured there were more knowledgeable people here who could give me better input to the question. I did have a thread or two moved arbitrarily by the new general there and I really don't want to have any more pissin' contests with anyone.

I don't have any story planned for this half of the category.
I have read some feedback where people said things like, "You'd better be sure the relatives are having sex in this story or it doesn't belong here!"
That and other things made me wonder what entails TABOO.
Peace!

 

[Edward Teach]

To begin with, turn she into he, then . . .

*****************************


The body could be found lying deep in the woods. It wasn't cold yet, and no one had seen the killing.

He looked over his shoulder, frozen while he listened. There was neither sight nor sound of a soul nearby.

The body was already dismembered and disembowelled. Around the corpse the bloody remnants lay, as a steamy vapour rose from the beckoning freshly-killed body.

He dropped his pants. Picking up the steaming pig's liver, he thrust himself between inviting folds of a realistically wet and warm organ.

Oh, finally he could begin pumping his haunches in the ritualistic motion.

God in Your Mercy! Thank You for designating torn meat, as well as pork, taboo.

The kosher butcher felt so good getting dirty, again!


****************************

It would probably get straight 1-votes, legitimately!

Nope. That's a five with a bullet.

 

[sweetnpetite]

Re: Re: Re: Thanks, everyone

[B I don't have any story planned for this half of the category.
I have read some feedback where people said things like, "You'd better be sure the relatives are having sex in this story or it doesn't belong here!"
That and other things made me wonder what entails TABOO.
Peace! [/B]

Sometimes people say completly ignorant things in feedback.

If it doesn't go in a category, Laurel usually won't put it there!

check out some of the feedback I got for "The first time the earth moved" http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/storyfeedbackboard.php?id=138295&pagehint=1

If I payed any attention to 'anonymous in the usa' I don't know what I'd do. This is an example of a person who just doesnt' get it. (ignore those people)

 

[fifty5]

To begin with, turn she into he, then . . .

*****************************


The body could be found lying deep in the woods. It wasn't cold yet, and no one had seen the killing.

He looked over his shoulder, frozen while he listened. There was neither sight nor sound of a soul nearby.

The body was already dismembered and disembowelled. Around the corpse the bloody remnants lay, as a steamy vapour rose from the beckoning freshly-killed body.

He dropped his pants. Picking up the steaming pig's liver, he thrust himself between inviting folds of a realistically wet and warm organ.

Oh, finally he could begin pumping his haunches in the ritualistic motion.

God in Your Mercy! Thank You for designating torn meat, as well as pork, taboo.

The kosher butcher felt so good getting dirty, again!


****************************

It would probably get straight 1-votes, legitimately!

Touché, Burley. First blood to you (if you'll pardon the expression) - honour is satisfied!

BTW - that last line (following the penultimate one) was so sharp! Making the religious side of the taboo explicit while turning the horror into a sick joke was brilliant!

I expect you're mostly right about the 1 votes, due to the revolting topic, but your version deserves 5 for doing it so well.

Eff

I kneel at the feet of a professional.

 

[MagicFingers]

Kinky vs. Perverted

"Do know the difference between kinky and perverted?" she asked.

"Well, kinky is where you use just a feather," she said, laughing. "And perverted is where you use the whole chicken."

 

[Virtual_Burlesque]

Nope. That's a five with a bullet.

Fired from a gun with its muzzle pointed at me I presume.

...I kneel at the feet of a professional.

Trying to peek up my skirt again, Eff?