Incest/Taboo (Daddy/dau) with some BDSM and Nonconsent/reluctance themes

[curious_slut]

I'm looking for an editor to help me fine-tune the piece I'm working on, it's my first proper piece that I'm writing just for me and I would really like to post it on literotica when it's finished so I could use some help.
I'll include the unedited beginning...


“Oh, yes! Harder, Daddy! Harder!! Fuck my tight little ass!”
Elizabeth was so deep in her fantasy of being fucked by her Daddy that she never heard him when he got home early from work that afternoon. While he was climbing the stairs, she was busy shoving her bright pink vibrator deep in her ass as she moaned out for him.
He thought that he heard her moaning as he headed toward her room and was worried she was in pain, but that worry was quickly assuaged when he was outside her bedroom door.
“Daddy! Fuck your little slut harder! Use me, Daddy! Please, Daddy! Oh god!”
He froze, unsure what to do. His cock was quickly hardening but his conscious told him to go downstairs and slam the front door so she knew he was home…but she was such a whore that she would probably just get louder so I could hear her even more. He reached down and rubbed the large bulge in his jeans as he tried to decide what to do. On one hand, he was her father and going in her room while she was masturbating was wrong. She was eighteen after all, and it was better she was pleasuring herself than risking getting pregnant by that asshole boyfriend of hers. But on the other hand, she was being a complete slut, begging for her own father to fuck her! His cock twitched and he made up his mind.



So if you'd be interested in helping me out, let me know!
I believe you can contact me here
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=997282&page=contact

Thanks for reading!

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

You might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

Oh, and it should be "… but his conscience told him …" in the extract you offered.

 

[meathead96]

Visited her website, offered my services, have not heard anything in return. Curious, if you read this, PM me and turn your PM's on (user cp).

 

[Firebrain]

Visited her website, offered my services, have not heard anything in return. Curious, if you read this, PM me and turn your PM's on (user cp).

So what kind of professional editing experience do you have? Just wondering, since you appear to be charging for it.

 

[meathead96]

Employed as a training manual writer and designer for many years, and I currently edit for authors in the UK, Australia and US. I do not limit my services to those countries, those are just the ones where my current paying clients are from.
I also edit for eBook authors.
Just to clarify, I was not charging her for it. I am on the list of 'volunteer' editors, and it is my way of giving back.
I hope that clarifies any questions that you might have.

So what kind of professional editing experience do you have? Just wondering, since you appear to be charging for it.

 

[Firebrain]

Employed as a training manual writer and designer for many years, and I currently edit for authors in the UK, Australia and US. I do not limit my services to those countries, those are just the ones where my current paying clients are from.
I also edit for eBook authors.
Just to clarify, I was not charging her for it. I am on the list of 'volunteer' editors, and it is my way of giving back.
I hope that clarifies any questions that you might have.

No, but you appear to be charging on your website (since you thank people for their "business" on your queries page) and you've got no editing experience from fiction publishing houses. Ergo, you cannot really advertise "professional editing" on your website -- as you currently are.

I edit for people too. I've got next to no experience of the publishing industry, though, and that means I cannot edit professionally. I've got no idea what publishing houses want to see, and anybody paying to get their work edited is looking to get it published.

Editing for grammar/spelling/content etc is not exactly what a professional editor does. They shape a text for the market, and you can't do that if you don't have a depth of experience within said market. You should know this, but the way you answered the question proves that you don't.

I hope people aren't paying you very much money. Writing a training manual is veeeery different to writing fiction.