Incest Story Idea

[Guest]

The problem with todays incest writtings is that they are not mysterious enough. The stories do not work you up slowly, they are very fast to get to the point.
In a slow and graphic seduction, a daughter who dresses very sexy and flamboyant begins to seduce her mother and father. This goes on for days. The mother and father are sexy, but straight, and have no idea what there daughter is up to....until it all boils over as the daughter slowly encourages her parrents to kiss her, feel her, lick her, and visa-versa. The mom is asked by her daughter to untie her top, unzip her mini, etc. Work it all up slowly and discriptively until sex explodes.

 

[Guest]

You are so right

That is true about many of the incest stories, that there is no tension or buildup, to an incestual relationship.
while to me it is the most crucial point of any incest story.

Its an easy route that many writers take in assuming that incest is a given in their stories, therefore the story winds up being a description of sex in a family that is totaly with no credibility.

Furthermore in most stories about dad and daughter, the daughter intiates the sexual relations, which is also an easy way to go, although I just read an excellent story written by:
The scribe: http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=8041 that despite what i said does work, reaad it and see what I mean.

What I'd like to see is that slow developing tension between dad and daughter. Where is that point of almost no return when dad confesses his desire or makes that forbidden touch, does the daughter respond in kind instantly, or is repulsed, at least at first.
this courtship, so loaded with fear of discovery and guilt.

What do you folks think?

 

[Guest]

I agree with the slow build-up style.

Personally, I love female domination stories. I would love to see a well written story about a mother who slowly seduces, then enslaves her teenage son. Maybe he is about to go to college or move out of the house, but she is afraid of losing him and being alone.

Or perhaps she transforms him into her daughter.

Also, too many of these stories involve a single parent out of convenience, ie dad died or parents divorced. Why couldn't both mother and father agree that the youngest teenage son should become their daughter and set out to transform him with the help of the entire family?