Incest Story Discussion

[mejau71]

Dear Friends,

I’ve been writing erotica for over seven years now, and am currently writing a new mother/son romance story. But in writing this new tale, I am curious how other writers view this popular theme. I am essentially trying to set up a fresh and creative way for this adult couple to come together as lovers.

I’ve seen countless stories with “mom catches son jerking off” as the catalyst, and know that has been hammered to death. In one of my more popular stories (A Tale of Forbidden Love ), I introduce a third person to help bring the mother and son together… typically a woman encourages them to explore their buried feelings, and do what is only natural between consenting adults.

I’ve used this plot device in two other stories, but want to explore other resources to unite my “new” couple together. I am currently using a blackmail plot where the son videotapes his mother having sex with a female co-worker of hers, and uses it against her (the son poses as an anonymous whistle blower through e-mail) to coerce her into a lifelong relationship. But this seems too cruel though since my ultimate goal for the couple is to spend the rest of their lives together as a devoted and loving husband and wife.

I’m not asking for a idea, but just some thoughts on what you’ve experienced writing in this genre yourselves, and some potholes to avoid or to exploit. I want the joining together of the couple to seem real; like “wow, this could really happen”.

Typically, I give emphasis to the emotional aspects of my love stories. I try to be as descriptive as possible (in regard to the sentimental and physical aspects), thus (hopefully) making the final reward (or payoff) a splendid end to the story.

Sorry for the rant. I’m just curious.

I hope to hear some feedback soon!

Peace and Love,
~Meredith

 

[MzDeviancy]

I think almost any cliche can be taken and made believable as well as enjoyable if written well enough. I mean, take the Stacy series by Mindfiend: mistaken identity leads to incestuous sex; done to fucking death, yet Mindfiend's stories are hailed by many incest fans as the best or at least some of the best in the incest genre.

That being said, I think everyone would appreciate a fresh premise for the hookup, if you can find one. Probably gets you a lot less views when you have some oft-reused description like 'Car accident leads to fun with Mom in the shower'.

You could also take a cliche and spin it. We've all read twenty million stories where the kid(s) find(s) the 'home movies' Mom doesn't show at Christmas, likewise the old parents/brother-find(s)-out-daughter/sister's-a-porn-star, but you could have Mom find her son's home movies with his girlfriend for a change.

 

[Pure]

I think it takes real work to bring mom and son together.

Most of the porno angles are pretty contrived, like walking in on mom masturbating, etc.

You suggest blackmail and rightly note that's not the best foot to get off on if you're going long term, true love, etc.

But come to think of it I don't know a real case of longterm true love, mom and son. (Maybe they're keeping it very quiet.) There is long term fucked up love and sickly dependency of the son.

Off hand, I'd say your best bet is a fling that could somehow be rationalized and motivated, but that ends, and miraculously both move on.

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Thinking of movies, La Luna tried the mother son thing, but more out of the son's being in bad shape, and needing comfort.

Close My Eyes is a fine film about brother and sister, which starts with the obvious, having them raised apart. But it too can't get the thing going indefinitely. Maybe that 'turn' could work for mom and son; have them split when he's four, and meet her 20 years later, not knowing. Sort of the Oedipus plot (that didn't turn out too well, either, but it took a while).

 

[alice_underneath]

Popping in to ask the moderator to please make space in his Inbox.

Apologies for the interruption....

Alice

 

[Pure]

done alice

 

[rajsar]

The Mom

dear friend,

your idea of writing up something spicy of mom is really sound... myself being a incest lover, xclusively with mom, really liked th thing.....but when th storyboard concerned i'd rather prefer something like rape of mom by three or four in presence of son. That may come with some flavor of bondage along with some messy play like licking of fresh milkcream or some saucy food from cocks or use of some unusual lubricant in pussy. And atleast one round of cumming in her mouth as well as face n boobs. obviously son will take part in the game by pressure from th mom's rapists.

now u decide wht to do.

tek kr

thnx
rajsar
02/05/2006

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

I've done mother/son before, but I had a different catalyst....a brainstorm idea that struck like a lightning bolt to the mother's mind and she decided to act on as an impulse in one case. In another, she was emotionally vulnerable and already very dependent on her strong, macho cop son. So her seduction of him was a matter of time. She saw him as being more mature than his 20 years. And another story involved a mother who had devoted her life to her son's happiness and got very angry when his wife, her daughter-in-law proved to be a selfish bitch. So she had no qualms about seducing her unhappily married son. Just some cases with my stories.

 

[ManSweat]

I would guess that there are probably dozens and dozens of situations that have yet to be explored. Like the monkey banging on a typewriter, sooner or later he'll write the great American novel, perhaps all it takes is a degree of brain-storming.

- Mom gives up son at birth due to the fact that she was but 13 (or 14, etc) and later in life "bumps" into him and they fall in love.

- No dad around so mom, feeling sorry because son has noone to share, Halloween, Christmas, birthday, etc, becomes more of a friend and as time progresses they share more than they should...

- Son goes with dad at divorce time because mom can't keep off booze/drugs, etc and years later they re-unite and son discovers mom has cleaned up and not looks a bit saucy to him.

- Low self-esteme mom asks for son's approval on her appearance. Son, mindful that she is still his mom, pushes her dressing into more suggestive. Mom finally figures it out and understands he has the hots for her. She too then realizes that she has the hots for him.

Just a few, just my $.02

R

 

[geronimo_appleby]

I found that by getting into the minds of the characters and showing either one or the other's reluctance to take the ultimate step can generate some positive reactions from readers. Of course they eventually succumb, but the aching, slow buildup can really get to people. At least that has been my limited experience to date. Just wish I had the time to get something out there these days.

 

[WyoD_S]

- Mom gives up son at birth due to the fact that she was but 13 (or 14, etc) and later in life "bumps" into him and they fall in love.

How about she knows that he is her long lost son that was given up for adoption, but he doesn't until much later in the story.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

How about she knows that he is her long lost son that was given up for adoption, but he doesn't until much later in the story.

Oedipus Rex. The original incest story.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Okay, I have no desire to write mother-son incest. Basically, my mom turned me off and it's even worse now that she's dead, but I'd had an idea kicking around for a while.

Mom and son are cyber lovers without knowing each other's identities. They're even cybering from the same house - him upstairs in his room, her downstairs in the den. As strangers, he tells her all the things he wants to do to her, tie her up and fuck her ass and eat her till she screams, watch her go down on other guys, and she's all for it. Then slowly it dawns on them who they're talking to and who the other one is.

The moment she finally figures it out and slowly walks up the stairs to his room, opens the door and stands in the doorway, the light spilling in behind her, him sitting there naked at his computer, and they look at each other and know... It could be good.

Like it? Give me a cut of the film rights and it's yours

 

[carsonshepherd]

Okay, I have no desire to write mother-son incest. Basically, my mom turned me off and it's even worse now that she's dead, but I'd had an idea kicking around for a while.

Mom and son are cyber lovers without knowing each other's identities. They're even cybering from the same house - him upstairs in his room, her downstairs in the den. As strangers, he tells her all the things he wants to do to her, tie her up and fuck her ass and eat her till she screams, watch her go down on other guys, and she's all for it. Then slowly it dawns on them who they're talking to and who the other one is.

The moment she finally figures it out and slowly walks up the stairs to his room, opens the door and stands in the doorway, the light spilling in behind her, him sitting there naked at his computer, and they look at each other and know... It could be good.

Like it? Give me a cut of the film rights and it's yours

Your post reminded me why I don't cyber with random strangers.... *shudders*

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Okay, I have no desire to write mother-son incest. Basically, my mom turned me off and it's even worse now that she's dead, but I'd had an idea kicking around for a while.

Mom and son are cyber lovers without knowing each other's identities. They're even cybering from the same house - him upstairs in his room, her downstairs in the den. As strangers, he tells her all the things he wants to do to her, tie her up and fuck her ass and eat her till she screams, watch her go down on other guys, and she's all for it. Then slowly it dawns on them who they're talking to and who the other one is.

The moment she finally figures it out and slowly walks up the stairs to his room, opens the door and stands in the doorway, the light spilling in behind her, him sitting there naked at his computer, and they look at each other and know... It could be good.

Like it? Give me a cut of the film rights and it's yours

Now, THAT is a good one! Write it, Doc!

 

[elsol]

I've written a large incest story that handled mom/son sex.

I just went with the 'Mother wanting son to grow up to be the best man he could be' angle.

Somewhere in the 'guiding him to maturity' she turns him into HER perfect man.

*tada*

Reason to fuck du jour.

Sincerely,
ElSol

 

[angelicminx]

Okay, I have no desire to write mother-son incest. Basically, my mom turned me off and it's even worse now that she's dead, but I'd had an idea kicking around for a while.

Mom and son are cyber lovers without knowing each other's identities. They're even cybering from the same house - him upstairs in his room, her downstairs in the den. As strangers, he tells her all the things he wants to do to her, tie her up and fuck her ass and eat her till she screams, watch her go down on other guys, and she's all for it. Then slowly it dawns on them who they're talking to and who the other one is.

The moment she finally figures it out and slowly walks up the stairs to his room, opens the door and stands in the doorway, the light spilling in behind her, him sitting there naked at his computer, and they look at each other and know... It could be good.

Like it? Give me a cut of the film rights and it's yours

Oh. I like it Dr. M. You do have an incredible imagination.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Thanks, guys, but someone else will have to do it. I just have an incredible aversion to incest stories. Some hangup of my own, no doubt, but the thought of parent-child incest makes me ill. I rank them down there with sex-with-animals stories. And ugly animals at that.

Maybe it was that blow job my mom gave me when I was growing up...?

 

[angelicminx]

Thanks, guys, but someone else will have to do it. I just have an incredible aversion to incest stories. Some hangup of my own, no doubt, but the thought of parent-child incest makes me ill. I rank them down there with sex-with-animals stories. And ugly animals at that.

Maybe it was that blow job my mom gave me when I was growing up...?

I understand the aversion to writing it. I'm just impressed with your imagination. Maybe mejau71 will take you up on the offer and write it. It has potential to be a great story.

(Psst... LOL!)

I'm not sure if I could write an incest story myself. I am going to give it a try for next year's survivor contest, provided that things stay settled down and I have time to really write. I do have a couple of ideas.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Thanks, guys, but someone else will have to do it. I just have an incredible aversion to incest stories. Some hangup of my own, no doubt, but the thought of parent-child incest makes me ill. I rank them down there with sex-with-animals stories. And ugly animals at that.

Maybe it was that blow job my mom gave me when I was growing up...?

That's not strictly fair. For thousands of years, before the Church introduced the idea of property, inter-family marriages were the way to keep the line pure.

 

[docgbrown]

Hmmm

Well you want realism that may cause long term relationship? Well in the only true tale that I know is in MO where a butt-ugly guy and his butt-ugly mom got together to make babies to continue to collect welfare money. I don't know how they came to their agreement but they were quite the topic of conversation at times there.

One track that I could see happening is where;
* The son is closer in age to his mother (she had him young or many of us will puke)
* Something happens to one the mother and the son is compelled to care for her and her basic (shower and bathroom) needs. This accident is needed to get him to see her in a humanized light, her to allow him access to her and time for their minds to begin to change.
* They are away from most of the rest of society. To avoid shame, law, embarrassment and competition they need to be not thinking of societal norms. (Why have used-up tumbleweed when you can have a new flower?) At least until the relationship is strengthened and solidified have them out of society.

Now to get these circumstances together;
* Car accident in a remote region
* Small plane accident
* A castaway boating thing

Well I would think that a car accident in a remote area that they were lost in is the most likely place where she could get injured, he would step up and impress his mother with his manly strength, stalwart determination, MacGyver ingenuity, parental unselfishness and genteel understanding - of her needs. Perhaps a warm region to aid in revealing what is under there clothes.

Despite hormones I think it a BIG leap for a young man to view his mother as a sexually desirable object. So too do I view a mother towards her son. For purposes of realism she needs to be forced to be in a position of vulnerability and him in one of responsibility to get them to get to the mutual allowance of him bathing, cleaning and caring of her.

They get rescued but she needs follow on care. Not rich, and with new-found intimacy they continue to have him care for her in all of her needs.

All humans are sexual and tension is felt from the start. Professionalism and trust is what keeps them from doing anything. You may desire to Harp on their mixed and unspoken feelings when he cares for her in her tender places. He begins to think of her as a sexual being and starts to have sexual thoughts and dreams about her. She starts to get aroused when she thinks of him or when he bathes her. She begins to fantasize about her son braking from his dutiful manner and ravishing her whilst she protests, but not too much.

She doesn’t REALLY want her son to force himself on her, after all you can’t rape the willing, but she finds herself getting wet at the thought and thinks of it happening more and more often. She starts to desire to see her son nude and is aroused by his slight displays of nubile flesh.

At this time you may want to go into their minds as her need for her son to care for her most basic functions diminishes. Perhaps they are both conflicted as she starts to realize that her son is no longer needed to bathe her and yet she kind of wants him to still bathe her. He too can be then delved into as he struggles with his emotions and desires as he is no longer privy to her body as he had recently become so accustomed and newly attracted to.

Perhaps a period of awkward distance separates them until something happens that brings them back together. Before they reunite, the both get into unsatisfying relationships with others, each with traits remarkably like each other. He starts out dating younger girls that he brings home but ends up with older women that he won’t let meet his mother. His mother starts with Men her age but dallies with younger and younger men and starts to develop a young man fetish. No matter who she is with it is her son who she eventually thinks of when they are laying with her.

Be it an ugly break-up, a run in at a nude beach, finding each other's photos on an adult connection fantasy website or a tearful confession, all of which can lead to them finally confess their adult love for each other and their desire to be with each other. They live in a city and move to another one to begin to live as man and wife.


I donno.... This really isn't my area of preoccupation. Hopefully something in here helps.


Good luck,

Doc

 

[scbigdog65]

Okay, I have no desire to write mother-son incest. Basically, my mom turned me off and it's even worse now that she's dead, but I'd had an idea kicking around for a while.

Mom and son are cyber lovers without knowing each other's identities. They're even cybering from the same house - him upstairs in his room, her downstairs in the den. As strangers, he tells her all the things he wants to do to her, tie her up and fuck her ass and eat her till she screams, watch her go down on other guys, and she's all for it. Then slowly it dawns on them who they're talking to and who the other one is.

There was a news story recently about a similar situation - some poor schmuck in Britain I think. I don't know that they were cybering, but actually made arrangements to meet after meeting online and chatting for weeks, then got the shock of their lives.

I think Dad was pretty pissed, too.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

That's not strictly fair. For thousands of years, before the Church introduced the idea of property, inter-family marriages were the way to keep the line pure.

I wasn't saying it was fair. I was only saying it has no appeal to me personally, church or no church. If the idea of fucking your mom or dad does it for you, then go for it.

I don't want to rain on anyone's parade, and we had a big discussion about this once before. It seems that no one wants to think about doing incest themselves, but we get off on thinking about other people doing it. Personally, when I write, I have to put myself in the story and that means thinking about fucking my mom or sister (or dad, if it comes to that), which totally turns me off.

Or maybe I just have an ugly family.

 

[drag631]

fictitious family

I agree with the doc. I've been obsessed with the topic for a while now, but I've never thought of anyone in my own family. I always imagine fictitious characters. Would I love to watch another family fuck? Of course. But my own? No thanks. They're not ugly, I swear.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

I agree with the doc. I've been obsessed with the topic for a while now, but I've never thought of anyone in my own family. I always imagine fictitious characters. Would I love to watch another family fuck? Of course. But my own? No thanks. They're not ugly, I swear.

Ditto.

But,

Okay, this idea came to me a couple of days ago while i was delivering a package to a house in the scenic countryside of Cambridgeshire, England.

It was the warmest day of the year so far; one of those bright, warm, spring days that gives the sweet girls their first opportunity to throw off the winter warmers and really enjoy the sunshine warming their skin. The house in question was big and very secluded; surrounded by trees and in its own grounds - very, very private.

Now, the inspiration just washed over me as I walked around the house looking for a service entrance at which to drop off the package. The gardens were perfectly tended, I could hear birds in the trees, and as I mentioned it was that perfect spring day. I imagined that in this house there was a secret, a slightly dark secret, but also one that was exciting; I could almost sense the sexual tension...

Now, in the story idea I have a young man tending the garden, he's helping out for the day just for the sheer pleasure of physical exercise and the feeling of the warm sunshine on his body. He's shirtless as he works and it's sheer coincidence that he's passing his mother's bedroom window just as she's flinging open the curtains inside. Of course she's naked and inadvertantly gives her son a full frontal flash of her nude body.

It is this moment of revelation that I want to concentrate on in the story as it's the pivotal point. It all happens in a flash of time but mentally both mother and son experience a burst of excitement. The son drinks in the sight of his mother's form exposed to him so suddenly and so shockingly. The mother, seeing her son's torso, lingers at the window for perhaps a second or two longer than she should before her eyes open wide in shock and she closes the curtains again... Did she actually tease her son? Did she enjoy seeing the initial shock on his face? Did she see lust burn in his eyes for just a moment before she pulled the curtains? As for the son, he's surprised at how he feels when he sees his mother's ripe body; those breasts, the shock of her pubic bush...

From here I will probably focus on each of the characters thoughts and emotions in turn. Each will be bothered by what they've seen, and of course, this being a tale of incest, they will both have increasing sexual desires for each other. Will they succumb? How will they approach each other? Who will make the first move? I will probably eke out the sweet torture and exquisite angst as they both struggle to maintain 'normality' whilst their individual, internal fires burn...

Okay, any comments from you guys? I haven't written in months and I owe a guy a Mum/Son incest story. I promised him I'd do it back in January but r/l gets in the way.

 

[ilove2love2]

Good ideas

You guys are great. I have ingested a lot of good ideas for my own story. Now I must digest them.