Incest premise help needed

[Agnol]

Looking for an idea for a premise on how a girl finds out her boyfriend is involved with his mother sexually and then finds out his whole family are incestuous with each other. Not looking for a whole story, just an idea of how to make this work. I have been trying to write this four different ways and each time I throw it away frustrated, but I don't want to give up just yet.

Please note: If you submit an idea here and I use it, you give it freely and realize it may get turned into a story.

 

[NotWise]

Maybe the Story Ideas forum would be a good place for your question.

 

[desecration]

You could go with the oldest trick in the book: the mother gets a very distinctive gift perfume, and the girlfriend smells it on the boyfriend or in his bed.

 

[SimonDoom]

She notices the boyfriend has been getting a lot of text messages and is suspicious that it's another girl that she knows is interested in him. When he goes to the bathroom she checks his phone and finds out the texts are from his Mom and she sent him an explicit photo of herself to him.

 

[JohnsonLongwood]

Maybe you are diving somewhere with him and yoiu hear a story on the radio news about a "mother and son in Australia" being arrested for having a love affair and he says he doesn't think it's anyone's business who loves who. in private. After that you begin to notice things betwern he and his mom that you hadn't before.

 

[Agnol]

Thanks!

Thank you for the suggestions, sorry for the wrong forum.

 

[Qubiquitous]

As Trixie is having sex with her boyfriend Dave's mother, she accidentally comments upon the wonderful way that "mom" is performing cunnilingus...

Mom was bringing Trixie the brink and pulling back... To the brink and pulling back... Several times until Trixie figuratively exploded.

"God, that was wonderful. It's just like Dave does it..."

"Oh child*... Where do you think he learned how..."



*an EXPRESSION, all characters are over 18.

 

[rescatooor]

Maybe you are diving somewhere with him and yoiu hear a story on the radio news about a "mother and son in Australia" being arrested for having a love affair and he says he doesn't think it's anyone's business who loves who. in private. After that you begin to notice things betwern he and his mom that you hadn't before.

Is it illegal in Australia then? I had been under the impression that incest is on of those things that is discouraged by law, but that's it.

 

[Rustyoznail]

Is it illegal in Australia then? I had been under the impression that incest is on of those things that is discouraged by law, but that's it.

Yes it is, but it's complicated. Each state has its own laws, and there's federal laws over the top.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

Hmmm... let's see... The mom and son are hot an heavy on the couch, the girlfriend was away for the day on some work thing. The son had popped home from work for a nooner. The girlfriend get home early from the work thing and sees his car in the drive, so she as usual pops in unannounced via the front door. She see's mom and son naked and going at it...

1. does she run screaming from the house never to return
2. does she just stand there frozen watching
3. does she strip down and join in

or any combination of the three.

Or maybe all three...

She stands there frozen, watching. After a bit she strips down and joins in, afterwards, she runs screaming from the house, naked, never to return again.

 

[desecration]

Is it illegal in Australia then? I had been under the impression that incest is on of those things that is discouraged by law, but that's it.

It strikes me that, in most countries, it's the kind of thing that is technically illegal but only gets enforced after something else goes really wrong, like inbred kids running around the countryside raping 'roos or something.

In Texas, if someone is inbred we just speak real slow.

 

[LexxRuthless]

I think the "How did she find out?" can occur a myriad of ways. What you have to ask yourself is "What outcome do I want from her discovery?" Is she supposed to be shocked and appalled -- at first -- only to get turned on by it as she thinks it over? Or did you have in mind a story in which the girlfriend walks in on the sex act, and then she is restrained and used by the whole family? Those are radically different stories, obviously.

Is the story told from the girlfriend's POV? If so, you could have her catch a glimpse of her boyfriend's mother sitting upright in their car just before her son slides out of the passenger side of the car. She didn't actually see anything inappropriate going on there, but she thinks, "Boy, it looked like his mom just finished giving him a blowjob in the car." She feels dirty for even thinking such a thing, but it makes her start paying attention to little things she would otherwise have missed.

That sort of approach lets you slowly drop clues that something is really going on between her boyfriend and his mother. If you give little bits of the girlfriend's thoughts, the readers can follow how she gradually unravels what is really happening. It seemed too far-fetched to be possible, but the more she investigates / snoops, the more she discovers.

The biggest question that leaves is "Why is this guy dating her in the first place?" If his mother and other family members are giving him all the amazing sex he could want, why did he feel the need to date this girl at all? Does he feel guilty for having sex with his family members, and he's looking to get into a "normal" relationship? Is he using this girl to divert suspicion? Is he seducing her into more sex with his entire family?

Again, there are a bunch of different stories that could be told depending on how you answer those questions.

 

[8letters]

Looking for an idea for a premise on how a girl finds out her boyfriend is involved with his mother sexually and then finds out his whole family are incestuous with each other. Not looking for a whole story, just an idea of how to make this work. I have been trying to write this four different ways and each time I throw it away frustrated, but I don't want to give up just yet.

Please note: If you submit an idea here and I use it, you give it freely and realize it may get turned into a story.

If the whole family is incestuous, I'd suggest the other members of the family try to distract the gf so the bf can have some mother-son time. When the gf finally gets back to the bf, there's some clue that he's had sex recently. Maybe she drags him away from the family, starts to give him a blowjob, he protests, and she thinks she tastes pussy on his cock.

 

[MillieDynamite]

If the whole family is incestuous, I'd suggest the other members of the family try to distract the gf so the bf can have some mother-son time. When the gf finally gets back to the bf, there's some clue that he's had sex recently. Maybe she drags him away from the family, starts to give him a blowjob, he protests, and she thinks she tastes pussy on his cock.

Not from the stars do I my judgment pluck, And yet methinks I something of foul fish smells here. Yes, by the putting of my tongue to prick, the dewdrops here have the savor of old, unwashed pussy. To say the truth, reason and love keep little company together nowadays, what old hag have thou fuckest?

 

[lovecraft68]

You have a bunch of stories posted here in Incest so if you can't come up with the idea then maybe the story isn't meant to be written.

That's how I decide whether an idea I have is 'real' and can be written, if its all there, its meant to be, if I don't know how to start it or don't have the plot, then I cut it loose.

 

[WyrdPair]

In Texas, if someone is inbred we just speak real slow.

Here in ************ we elect them to public office.

 

[Agnol]

You have a bunch of stories posted here in Incest so if you can't come up with the idea then maybe the story isn't meant to be written.

That's how I decide whether an idea I have is 'real' and can be written, if its all there, its meant to be, if I don't know how to start it or don't have the plot, then I cut it loose.

Sometimes I get stuck in my own head and drag the story so far down into backstory I have to give up and start over. Over the years I've been trying to *get to the point*. Somedays I can do it, then there are weeks and months where I can't.

 

[Rustyoznail]

Sometimes I get stuck in my own head and drag the story so far down into backstory I have to give up and start over. Over the years I've been trying to *get to the point*. Somedays I can do it, then there are weeks and months where I can't.

That's where a couple of good beta readers can help.