incest/lesbian/pregnancy

[Dr Robert]

I have been searching high and low (no pun intended) for an incest/lesbian/three way story. Here is the premise:

The father of a underage content removed per site regulations daughter has been having an incestuous affair with her for about 2 years, unbeknownst to the mother. She, the daughter, has now blossomed into a beautiful, well-endowed woman. Her father wants to add mom to the mix, but is unsure how to achieve this. Daughter suggests that she come into the room while Mom & Dad are making love and proceed to strip and begin masturbating in front of Mom, hoping to get her aroused. She then starts talking dirty about how it feels when Daddy does things to her. She climbs in bed with them and starts to ask Mom things like “Do you like my breasts Mommy?…Do you want to suck my nipples?… Does it turn you on when I play with my pussy?” Then she starts masturbating her Mother while Dad is playing with his daughter. Mom & Daughter get into a torrid lesbian lovemaking scene, after which daughter tells Mom that she (the daughter) wants her (Mom) to watch while Daddy fucks her. At first she is repulsed, but then finds it highly erotic watching her father make love to her. She starts to fondle and suck her daughters breasts. Then she tells her daughter that she wants to have her pussy eaten while her father cums in her. Then she states that if the affair is to continue, she wants the father and daughter to have unprotected intercourse. When asked why, she states that she wants a baby inside her daughter so that she (the mother) can force her to begin lactating and that she wanted to breastfeed from her daughters breasts.

And from there, I have no idea where to go with it.

 

[Dr Robert]

a little feedback gang

I know that a bunch of you have read the post and a few (5) have voted on it, so let's hear some feedback. Good, bad or indifferent. I'm an adult... I can take criticism. Also, let me know, if you voted, why you voted the way you did.

Thanks!!!!

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Well,

It gets a lot of points for imagination, but suffers in the plausibility department. In the first place very few mom's want copetition for their husbands attentions from nubile teenagers. In the second most people would be agast if their child came into the room during lovemaking, much less wanted to join.

A more reasonable way to work it would be for the mother to be bisexual. Let the daughter come on to mom privately. From there your final threesome in the bedroom might seem more plausible. I have to admit I don't write incest stories or read them very much so I don't know how important plausibility is anyway.

-Colly

 

[sanchopanza]

I agree with Colly. It's the plausibility factor that is always at stake in incest stories - you often have to believe that just because a man finds his daughter attractive he'll have no qualms about fucking her straight out. I think mainstream literature, when it has dabbled with incest has managed the idea better than porno writers.

I just read 'Waterland' by Johnathon Swift, I didn't think much of the book (way too post-modern) but it handled an incestuous relationship between father and daughter well. The actual act of incest was not dwelled upon for long, but it was justified as an act that real human beings, real characters would do. Everybody knows that in secluded areas inbreeding still goes on - it does, don't argue with me - and so it used this as a pretext for a mentally scarred father to beget a child by his daughter.

I think the story could work and many people would appreciate it but to catch the rest of us who want to read well-written and plausible stories you'll have to write the story with plausible context for an incestuous relationship.

The other part of this idea is that it needs build up. Many stories will have a daughter and her friend talking about boys then the friend will say that the daughter's father is good-looking, then that night the daughter and the father fuck!? Where's the sense in that?

 

[EroticWhispers77]

Keep in mind that a father cannot have a 2 year long "affair" with his now 16 year old child on Lit.

 

[sanchopanza]

so just substitute 16 for 20 to keep it within the rules

 

[EroticWhispers77]

Right. I just wanted to point it out since no one else had.

 

[Colleen Thomas]

I might also point out when you post that this isn't really lesbianism, it's bisexuality since dad is there. A minor point, but people looking for lesbian relations will probably give you some nasty feedback.

-Colly

 

[sanchopanza]

it wouldn't be posted as lesbian fiction though would it? it would be submitted in incest. the only people that hear it has anything to do with lesbians are us lot in the authors hangout

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Of course it would go in incest. It was merely a note that using lesbian in the title or F/F in the key's might be a bad idea. Nothing more.

-Colly

 

[Dr Robert]

Thanks for the feedback

I wasn't even going to attempt to write the piece. God knows, I'm not a fiction writer (a fact attested to by every English teacher I've ever had.) I was just wondering if there would be any interest in a story like this. I have friends that dabble in this type of writing and they said they would have a bash at it if there was enough interest.

Thanks again.

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Re: Thanks for the feedback

I wasn't even going to attempt to write the piece. God knows, I'm not a fiction writer (a fact attested to by every English teacher I've ever had.) I was just wondering if there would be any interest in a story like this. I have friends that dabble in this type of writing and they said they would have a bash at it if there was enough interest.

Thanks again.

The incest category is one of the most popular, I am sure you would get plenty of views/votes. Keep in mind that the boards are viewed by a very lean subsetof lit members, the readership is much broader and tends to be less picky.

-Colly

 

[flawed_ethics]

Well, aside from the Incest and Lesbian territories that you'd be entertaining, you'd also be touching on two, maybe three niche markets: impregnation, lactation and (if you write long enough into the storyline) pregnancy/preggo-sex.

For what it's worth, a little research into these realms would go a long way to "THANK YOU!!!" feedback and respective votes. It doesn't take much to entertain. Except, as the others have chimed, it goes a long way to be plausable. You don't want to have people click to read, only to be turned away because of how certain events unfolds.

 

[hellsgate]

I love the idea of Dad knocking up ~BOTH~ Mom & Daughter better.

But I'd also like to see a variation where the kid is 27, 28 years old & living at home due to post secondary education requirements. The Mom & Son are going at it & Dad insists Mom go permanently ~off~ the pill if she ~must~ be making love to her own son & get pregnant so that she's forced to lactate.

 

[kingquib]

horrible idead

I think the ideaad of father/mother/daughter is great. i love that, but your method of getting the mother to cooperate is just silly. The daughter goes into the room and starts masturbating? No way, there has to be a better way to secduce the mother. That's what makes a story believable. If getting parents to throw a threesome was that easy, kids would be jumping into their parent's bedroom half naked with their hands stroking or poking or whatever.

I think a better way to seduce the mother is if the husband was to start having sex with the wife, making her real hory. He finished her first, leaving her unsatisfied. He does this for a few days. Then on the fourth day, he's getting her reall heated up, and then the daughter comes in. They talk for a while and then they all have a pillow fight and then that turns into wrestling and then THAT turns into sex. You see, you need to transition the point of sex. Not just wham, I'm naked your horny, let's all have sex now.