Incest in a Movie Theater

[HeyAll]

Stories of incest in close-confinements have always been popular. To use a popular example, there's that popular storyline of a mother & son in the back of a cramped car.

How about something like this in a theater?

I think it works best as a mother/son or brother/sister story.

The female character had a date, who backed out at the last minute. They won't be seeing each other anymore for whatever reason. She's lonely, and slightly depressed. She sat in the dining room, having a drink of wine.

The male character tries to make her feel better. Offers to take her to the movies. On the ride there, they laugh and flirt in the car.

The movie is a drama about a marriage, there's more sex than they expected. The female character is still slightly drunk. She makes advances. They're in the back of the theater. Incest ensues.

Thoughts? Ideas? Takers?

 

[BurningMonkey]

Having been one that's attempted sex (though not with either my mother or sister, lol) in a movie theater, with limited success, I can tell you that it's much more difficult than one might imagine.

First, even though the lights are out, it's not dark. The screen images provide plenty of light to see what you're doing by anyone who chances to look around. So much for secrecy.

Second, the seats are badly situated for this. About the best you can do is a blowjob and finger-fuck; there's no room for pussy-eating unless she's sitting on the edge of the back, nor room enough for fucking without one or the other being in an awkward or uncomfortable position, which in my case gave me a bad charlie horse. Plus there's the ever-constant danger of either one or the other of you slipping and hurting themselves.

My advice? Forget the theater. There are plenty of other cramped spaces in which to fuck--the bathroom on a plane or train, in one of the sample garden sheds set up at Home Depot, in a storage closet at work or school, etc., etc. Stick with one of those.

 

[MagicFingers]

It's not about cramped spaces

This would be a Public, Incest story. It's all about the excitement of incest, and the danger of getting caught that would drive their adrenaline sky high.
And it's a story for entertainment. It doesn't have to be real or normal. That's boring.

 

[BurningMonkey]

*shrug* So write it, MagicFingers. Let us all know how it turns out.

 

[Carnevil9]

There are movie theaters with "love seats" - double wide, for sharing. I'm most often seen these at theaters where the rows are staggered slightly (so you are never behind someone's head). At the end of the row, they put the extra wide seat to even things up.

I'm sure some hanky-panky could be accomplished in one of those.

 

[HeyAll]

I'll be writing this one.

If anyone wants to write a similar thing. Feel free.

 

[spectreofhell]

I agree, the movie theater isn't exactly conducive to a full love-making scene. The set-up you've devised is pretty awesome, though. I know, it's a bit cliché to have Mom and Son end up on a date together, but it's a trope I love all the same. Having her a little drunk before they leave is good, the flirting in the car is a prelude of things to come, the movie has intense sex scenes which arouse poor lonely Mom, as well as dear Son. Perhaps they were holding hands when they entered, just a sign of familial love. They continued holding hands and snuggling in the theater, the flirtation continuing, and then when the sexual desire grows too strong, those hands wander...

Fondling would lead to rampant desire. You could then either move them to a different locale for consummation or you could start with them in the balcony. Movie theaters used to have those. Maybe the balcony was roped off, disused, and feeling naughty they jumped the rope so they have the balcony all to themselves? Then they could fuck their brains out just as you envisioned with only minimal fear of being caught.

It's a great premise. I look forward to what you come up with!

 

[HeyAll]

I'm working on it. It's fun so far.

The movie theater is appealing because there's sort of a exhibitionist/voyeur aspect to it. They have to keep it down so others won't hear, or find out. There's a huge risk.

It's the same as reading an incest sex scene which happens in the bathroom of a family party. It adds a different layer of taboo to the sex scene.

 

[SuperWill19]

Looking forward to reading this story. I read some of the people's reply's on how this couldn't work. But so many ideas ran through my mind on how this could work. I hope to see this story soon.

 

[Ldy_Sea]

Why is it lately a lot of people are pointing out the reality of erotic stories.

I have yet to have someone come to my house with pizza and fuck him,

Or to catch two people having sex and be invited to join in

Porn is not about reality, it is about what gets you off. Who cares if the reality is less sexy, fantasies are not about reality they are fantasies.

BTW sex in movie theaters is possible. I have seen it happen twice in my life.

 

[JKendallDane]

I have yet to have someone come to my house with pizza and fuck him,

You are obviously not ordering from the right pizza shop...or not tipping the pizza boy well enough.

 

[Ldy_Sea]

You are obviously not ordering from the right pizza shop...or not tipping the pizza boy well enough.

WHo said it was a boy?

 

[spectreofhell]

The point isn't about realism, it's about setting up rules to the world your story is set in and sticking to them. If you set your story in the real world, then you have to obey the rules of the real world, otherwise you're not writing a story, you're just spilling out a masturbation fantasy you had. I see that way too often. Crafting fiction is exactly that, a craft, and you have to think about your character's motivations, how they would react to given situations, and how the world works around them.

If your goal in the story is, for instance, to have a couple fuck in a movie theater, then work the angle of the story to let that happen. Perhaps they're exhibitionists who get off on all the people watching them. Maybe there's a reason they're the only ones in the theater at the time. Maybe they just don't give a shit what's going on around them as they succumb to passion. Whatever it is, develop your premise, create the situation and the rules, and stick to it. That's what matters.

The pizza guy (or gal) shows up at the door and you want a sexual situation to occur, then you are already thinking of WHY it would happen. It's not about realism as much as plausibility, meaning that characters behave in ways that adhere to their personalities, events unfold accordingly, and you're actually telling a story instead of something you fantasize about. A fantasy is just a bare-bones kind of thing, where you dream about fucking that hot neighbor but don't really care about how you ended up together. In the story where your character fucks that hot neighbor, there MUST be a reason for why and how they came together. To craft a good story, YOU must know the backstory even if you don't reveal all of it to the reader, because our history is what shapes our future decisions.

 

[MaryR]

I agree, the movie theater isn't exactly conducive to a full love-making scene. The set-up you've devised is pretty awesome, though. I know, it's a bit cliché to have Mom and Son end up on a date together, but it's a trope I love all the same. Having her a little drunk before they leave is good, the flirting in the car is a prelude of things to come, the movie has intense sex scenes which arouse poor lonely Mom, as well as dear Son. Perhaps they were holding hands when they entered, just a sign of familial love. They continued holding hands and snuggling in the theater, the flirtation continuing, and then when the sexual desire grows too strong, those hands wander...

Fondling would lead to rampant desire. You could then either move them to a different locale for consummation or you could start with them in the balcony. Movie theaters used to have those. Maybe the balcony was roped off, disused, and feeling naughty they jumped the rope so they have the balcony all to themselves? Then they could fuck their brains out just as you envisioned with only minimal fear of being caught.

It's a great premise. I look forward to what you come up with!

I think your description is too harsh. It is much more erotic if there is some under clothes secret feeling and fondling

 

[BurningMonkey]

The point isn't about realism, it's about setting up rules to the world your story is set in and sticking to them. If you set your story in the real world, then you have to obey the rules of the real world, otherwise you're not writing a story, you're just spilling out a masturbation fantasy you had. I see that way too often. Crafting fiction is exactly that, a craft, and you have to think about your character's motivations, how they would react to given situations, and how the world works around them.

If your goal in the story is, for instance, to have a couple fuck in a movie theater, then work the angle of the story to let that happen. Perhaps they're exhibitionists who get off on all the people watching them. Maybe there's a reason they're the only ones in the theater at the time. Maybe they just don't give a shit what's going on around them as they succumb to passion. Whatever it is, develop your premise, create the situation and the rules, and stick to it. That's what matters.

The pizza guy (or gal) shows up at the door and you want a sexual situation to occur, then you are already thinking of WHY it would happen. It's not about realism as much as plausibility, meaning that characters behave in ways that adhere to their personalities, events unfold accordingly, and you're actually telling a story instead of something you fantasize about. A fantasy is just a bare-bones kind of thing, where you dream about fucking that hot neighbor but don't really care about how you ended up together. In the story where your character fucks that hot neighbor, there MUST be a reason for why and how they came together. To craft a good story, YOU must know the backstory even if you don't reveal all of it to the reader, because our history is what shapes our future decisions.

What he said. Even if the scenario is implausible, the setting and actions must be plausible.

I read what started out as a great story about a small woman and a guy fucking standing up, but it lost me at one point where he's holding her suspended in the air and lowering and raising her on his dick using just his arms. That flies in the face of reality. No otherwise normal man can curl a hundred pound woman, repeatedly raising and lowering her without her feet touching the ground.

Just because it's erotica doesn't mean the laws of physics have been rescinded--unless you're writing science fiction, of course...

 

[rudrakshpathak]

great idea

lots of possibilities