Incest Idea - Stranded on a Tropical Island

TheCaptain

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Heya all :D

Got the laptop back (for those few who knew it had stopped workin here on the Lit boards), so YAY FOR ME! :p

This is sort of like a Lost-esque idea, thou without the weird monster shite and constant peril.

Family is somehow marooned on a deserted island while on holiday in south Pacific, I think only the family itself will be on the island, no outsiders... everything that they need to live comfortably is there, food and water in abundance, and shelter is provided by the stud-son, Peter.

I'm thinkin that there's a mother char, her daughter, and her son - no dad, this is the staple single-parent family.

Nobody knows where they are, so they have to live off the land and try to keep sane.

Soon thou, clothing becomes an issue, as it all begins to deteriorate and wear thin - their clothes luggage was lost along with almost everything else in the plane/boat. They discuss the issue as a family, and the mother char convinces her children that this is not really a major concern, that they are family, this is a trying situation, and no-one would begrudge them going around naked on the island... there was nothing wrong with that, under the circumstances.

They also come to a mutual yet unspoken agreement that, every once in awhile when one of the three of them goes off into the jungle a little bit, they are to have their privacy, as they're probably wanking off... they usually come back 10-15 minutes later, flushed and a little drenched with sweat, but more happy and together than before - the stress and sexual tension, however, is rising exponentially with each passing day.

Soon too, they are spying on each other clandestinely during each other's wank-sessions - sister catches bro 'red-handed', if you will, and they both enjoy watching Mom frig her cunt off together.

Sister demands to suck bro's cock or she'll tell their mother that she'd caught him spying on her - brother relents.

From there, they carry on a sexual relationship together, building up to intercourse and anal sex, while their Mom is increasingly driven wild by her own passionate desires for some form of deep sexual release that she cannot fulfill anymore with her fingers or makeshift dildos.

The siblings know that stoic, matriarchial Mom will be a hard woman to seduce, but the young woman is sure she can get through to her mother and make her theirs. She manages to break through her Mom's mental defenses and get her to admit that she has incestuous thoughts about both of her children, but the mother tries to deny her child's reasonings, saying that they'll be rescued soon, it will all be alright...

She doesn't even really believe what she is saying, herself.

The women have a lesbian experience, as the son char watches and waits... then, his sister beckons him over, and their Mom practically pounces on him, jamming his cock straight into the depths of her moist, wet pussy, so starving was she for dick that all reason had escaped her...

Is this a good premise for a story? I'm thinking either one big one, or a three-part series...

Thoughts/suggestions would be great.

Capt



Characters *preliminary ideas

Chantelle - Mom Character
http://www.almightyzeus.com/gals/chanel/tits/pics/chnsrdwtpl019.jpg

Sandee - Sister/Daughter Character
http://www2.sinfulcurves.com/Protected_Sub/images/EricaCampbell4180.jpg
 
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there are several versions of this idea posted already, but a fresh take would be fun.
I wonder if just three characters wil be sustainable over a longer yarn.
 
sirhugs said:
there are several versions of this idea posted already, but a fresh take would be fun.
I wonder if just three characters wil be sustainable over a longer yarn.
hmmm... well, it makes sense that the idea's probably been used before, I guess :cool:.

Might have to run a search or something on a few keywords, see what I can dredge up...

It's sort-of a combination of taboo with the old WWII story I was lookin at doin a-whilez back, about some personnel getting shipwrecked on an island. But I reckon I might be able to work this one out pretty well, write it up a bit better/different than it's been done before, if nothing else :D.

Capt
 
I could always somehow work in more characters, if I wished it to be a little long - don't really know if I DO want it to be open-ended or uber long ATM, but the option's there. Make it a large family gathering/holiday event, or something along those lines...

Is this a good idea or not? I'm not really sure... I THINK it has promise, but is that just me goin off on a weird tangent, or is there something to this concept?

Capt
 
The "stranded on an island" setup has benn done so often it's hard to be interested. What I'd like to see (maybe it's been done; I don't read usually "island" stories), is the island being used as a catalyst to something else. In other words, after Ch. 1 or 2 they get rescued. Mom sits the kids down and explains that what happened was all about the extenuating circumstances and that it's now officially over. But of course it isn't...

Before long the kids are back at it, behind Mom's back because they know she'll disapprove. Meanwhile, Mom's been having naughty thoughts about the kids, "reliving" some of the hotter things they did on the island. I have a few different ideas about where it would go from there, but you can probably guess how it ends!
 
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TheCaptain said:
I could always somehow work in more characters, if I wished it to be a little long - don't really know if I DO want it to be open-ended or uber long ATM, but the option's there. Make it a large family gathering/holiday event, or something along those lines...

Is this a good idea or not? I'm not really sure... I THINK it has promise, but is that just me goin off on a weird tangent, or is there something to this concept?

Capt

the basic idea is sound, just needs strong wroting and fresh angles.
 
sirhugs said:
the basic idea is sound, just needs strong wroting and fresh angles.
Wow! I only just ran a search for 'island' under the Incest category, and there are a pretty fair amount of stories out there... but only about half that are Hs. Still might be worth going ahead, just so long as the wroting is strong! :p

Capt
 
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TheCaptain said:
Wow! I only just ran a search for 'island' under the Incest category, and there are a pretty fair amount of stories out there... but only about half that are Hs. Still might be worth going ahead, just so long as the wroting is strong! :p

Capt

you making fun of my typos?
 
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