Incest accidental penetration

[rodav]

I hope somebody could write a story like this.

It could be a nudist mother and son while slow dancing in a sweet music and casual about a son having an eretion, The son being outbalanced and fell on his butt on the edge of the bed or sofa. causing the son pulling the mom with him and ended up accidentally impaling herself in his son's hard cock. They were both wide eyed with surprise.

Or a nudist family with a brother and sister play wrestling on the floor and the sister stradling her brother to get the best of him. The Mom enjoying watching them was a bit shocked and surprised wide eyed when she saw that the daughter accidentally impaled herself on the brother and saw how her son's cock glistened with pussy juice when the sister withdrew from her brother's cock. The mom pretending to scold her kids but smiling. The kids just laugh about it and told their mom that it was just an accident.

Or Mother and son coddles naked in bed or the mom could just be wearing short nighties with out panties with their legs entwined and suddenly the phone rings and both of them got surprised and both jerked at the same time and suddenly they realised that the son's cock is burried deep in the mother's pussy.

This could be somewhat an incest story with some humor in it.

 

[rodav]

Hope some writer would consider this story.

Also a reluctant but very loving mom while bottomless being hugged by her naked son kind of pinning her on the wall with his hard cock pointing to the mom's pussy. She is on tiptoe so that the son would not penetrate her, but she was getting tired and has to relax her legs and that causes her to slowly impaling hersef to her son's hard cock.

I have read similar kind of this stories here in Literotca. Hope somebody could tell us the title.

 

[loquere]

You wrote 330 words so far, trying to get a writer. You could tackle it yourself.

 

[rodav]

Wish I could. But I am not a writer. Need a real writer who could add more flowery words and exciting details.

 

[Hypoxia]

Wish I could. But I am not a writer. Need a real writer who could add more flowery words and exciting details.

But someone else's writing won't be YOUR words and YOUR details.

Have you ever kept a journal-diary-blog? Write your story as a series of blog or diary entries. Visualize the events, just as if they had happened, and write them down. Then re-visualize it all, and add details. It's not difficult, really.

 

[loquere]

Wish I could. But I am not a writer. Need a real writer who could add more flowery words and exciting details.

-Biiiiittttcchhhhhhhhhh please, you don't need that shit right now, the more you write the better you get.

-Think of how you started riding a bike.

-You don't have sex the way you did that first time, do you? I'm sure today you have a calm confident ease, touch & thrust, an awareness, a skill and prowess you didn't posses on your first go.

-I'm an okay writer but I'm sure in the future I'll be good.

-I'm not a professional writer.

-I'm a amateur writer, but most on here are too. Except hypoxia he be special and stuff.

 

[Hypoxia]

Special and stuff. Hmmm...

 

[bernett69]

one of the best reasons to wrestle your sister nude.

 

[blue4lu]

You wrote 330 words so far, trying to get a writer. You could tackle it yourself.

I agree with this poster rodav. You have three very good scenarios, (especially the first one). so pick one and go for it. Yes, there are some here who might "pick" at your word terms or whether you crossed all the t's and dotted all the i's but for the most part they are only trying to be helpful.

Write it and don't worry about it. Sounds like a fun event.

 

[loquere]

I agree with this poster rodav. You have three very good scenarios, (especially the first one). so pick one and go for it. Yes, there are some here who might "pick" at your word terms or whether you crossed all the t's and dotted all the i's but for the most part they are only trying to be helpful.

Write it and don't worry about it. Sounds like a fun event.

Agreed. If people don't have any thing positive to say, tell 'em to fuck off.

 

[JaxRhapsody]

The only way to learn is to do it. I'm sure when you were in school, you had to write in english class for a portfolio, I wish I knew what I knew then. I'm going to write this idea, to take a break from the other shit I'm writing. Pay no heed to my recycled names.

 

[JaxRhapsody]

Well, I played with it a little.

 

[RicoLouis]

Well, I played with it a little.

"That's what she said."

Hoping you meant the story.

 

[loveupskirt]

It's a bit irritating and perplexing that everytime someone brings a story idea here they are ambushed by those saying they should write it themselves! Read the damn board description! Accept that some people are not writers and that they are more qualified to determine that than you are! If you aren't interested in picking up the idea or contributing to it, don't read the thread. Pretty simple really.

 

[Hypoxia]

It's a bit irritating and perplexing that everytime someone brings a story idea here they are ambushed by those saying they should write it themselves! Read the damn board description! Accept that some people are not writers and that they are more qualified to determine that than you are! If you aren't interested in picking up the idea or contributing to it, don't read the thread. Pretty simple really.

I suppose we're trying to spread the contagion, or recruit for the lifestyle, something conspiratorial like that. "Hey kid, have a hit of this, the first shot's free! Heh heh."

"Some people are not writers" ?? Well, very few of us are born writers. Most of us have to learn. I couldn't write for shit till I learned. (Some say I still can't write for shit. Whatever.) And I didn't learn to write in high school. When did I *really* learn? In a summer-night-school (junior college) English Comp class where the semester assignment was to write a "research journal". Pick a subject. (Hallucinogenic plants.) Read about the subject every day. Write about it every day, reviewing and expanding on the reading. In other words, a focused blog. (This was in 1978, a bit before the iNet.)

I occasionally mention that an IMHO easy way to write stories is to treat them as blog entries. Many of us, even non-writers, have kept some sort of journal-diary-blog. Most of us also know how to talk. We talk about ourselves and others. We tell stories. We can learn to write down what we say. If we tell a story, and write it down, then hey presto! We're storytellers, writers, authors! And the contagion is spread.

(Also, maybe we just don't like the OP's story ideas enough to write them ourselves, so we encourage the bloke, hoping they'll take the hint and leave us alone.)

 

[MyRubiLips]

It's a bit irritating and perplexing that everytime someone brings a story idea here they are ambushed by those saying they should write it themselves! Read the damn board description! Accept that some people are not writers and that they are more qualified to determine that than you are! If you aren't interested in picking up the idea or contributing to it, don't read the thread. Pretty simple really.

 

[rustywilliams]

Or perhaps she enjoys chatting about the idea, without the need to write an entire story?

 

[blue4lu]

It's a bit irritating and perplexing that everytime someone brings a story idea here they are ambushed by those saying they should write it themselves! Read the damn board description! Accept that some people are not writers and that they are more qualified to determine that than you are! If you aren't interested in picking up the idea or contributing to it, don't read the thread. Pretty simple really.

I don't believe anyone here was out to "ambush" rodav. But I do believe it was in the spirit of encoragement and support. Many will climb a tree but very few go out on a limb. The guy has a plausible storyline, he just needs to wrap words around it. Is there a greater accomplishment than having done something from start to finish - without outside help? I am willing to bet that, should he do this on his own, he will see he is a better writer than first thought.

(By the way, his "plot" is so intriguing that I would LOVE to pick it up and run with it but for one small fact. I do not believe in hijacking one's story ideas for my own. But oh man, it sure has possibilities)!

 

[rodav]

It's a bit irritating and perplexing that everytime someone brings a story idea here they are ambushed by those saying they should write it themselves! Read the damn board description! Accept that some people are not writers and that they are more qualified to determine that than you are! If you aren't interested in picking up the idea or contributing to it, don't read the thread. Pretty simple really.

Very well said...loveupskirt.

Also English is only my second language. My concern is that my grammar might not be good enough. I have been in this site for a good while now and have read lots of very negative comments...

 

[LWulf]

It's a bit irritating and perplexing that everytime someone brings a story idea here they are ambushed by those saying they should write it themselves! Read the damn board description! Accept that some people are not writers and that they are more qualified to determine that than you are! If you aren't interested in picking up the idea or contributing to it, don't read the thread. Pretty simple really.

I haven't said it in this thread, but since I have in other threads, I'll take up the gauntlet of challenge.

It falls to those that are asked, to ask themselves "Can I do better than the one who asks?"

A person asks "Can you write a story about a dog named Boo. The dog has some misadventures and then falls one day and dies. The End.

This, to me, is a person who is just tossing out an idea.

If the same person instead wove a pattern of thought that is expressive and they seem passionate about that which they wrote, going to the extent of noting little details, then this person I would suggest to write the story themself.

Sometimes it is not the way an idea is written but the pressing need of those that post it, pressing another to write it.
"Here is this idea I have, can someone write it, Please, please, please???" Again, this person I would likewise suggest they write it. Mostly because no matter what you write for this person, they will find fault no matter how well you write it. Why? Because it's next to impossible to write about someone else's passion. You can come close, but ultimately you will fail.

At any time, that someone writes with passion and feeling, then that person, whether they know it or not, is a writer. More importantly, whether they BELIEVE in themself or not, they are a writer. As someone else said "Nobody is born a writer."

More importantly, this is a story IDEAS thread. "I have an idea, YOU should write this."

How is that NOT an idea?

 

[JaxRhapsody]

It's a bit irritating and perplexing that everytime someone brings a story idea here they are ambushed by those saying they should write it themselves! Read the damn board description! Accept that some people are not writers and that they are more qualified to determine that than you are! If you aren't interested in picking up the idea or contributing to it, don't read the thread. Pretty simple really.

some people have good ideas, so we suggest they attempt to write it out of good nature, or it may be something they themselves understand more than we do. It's not like we're hounding them, demanding them to write anything. Calm down, no need to type loudly. None of this means we won't write it, or attempt to, hell, I've even tried to make contest out of it. It's not about who's more qualified, or who's a better writer. It's all about a good story you can cum to.

 

[rodav]

Jaxrhapsody, Thanks for writing the O brother story.
Hope you can still write more.

 

[rodav]

I hope you check an incest story " Kimberly's sin" by cindyexposed. It is a very good, exciting story about a loving mother and son.

 

[loveupskirt]

Sorry if I came across a bit overzealous, but the description is fairly clear. I'm guessing anyone bringing an idea here has already considered the option of writing it themselves. And while nobody is born a writer, nobody is born a painter, a singer, a doctor, or a magician either, but the passion and desire needs to be there.

I have no doubt that I (or anyone else) could become a decent writer, but don't have the desire, the time, or the motivation to hone the craft. This board is a story idea board and I would suggest we let it be just that. Sometimes an idea is just a seed and maybe someone who can write well decides to pick it up and plant it!

Is it really necessary for every idea to be suggested back to the original poster? If you aren't interested in picking up an idea, why even read these particular posts???

 

[Hypoxia]

Sorry if I came across a bit overzealous, but the description is fairly clear. I'm guessing anyone bringing an idea here has already considered the option of writing it themselves. And while nobody is born a writer, nobody is born a painter, a singer, a doctor, or a magician either, but the passion and desire needs to be there.

I have no doubt that I (or anyone else) could become a decent writer, but don't have the desire, the time, or the motivation to hone the craft. This board is a story idea board and I would suggest we let it be just that. Sometimes an idea is just a seed and maybe someone who can write well decides to pick it up and plant it!

Is it really necessary for every idea to be suggested back to the original poster? If you aren't interested in picking up an idea, why even read these particular posts???

Some established authors post story ideas here. Sometimes they're looking for suggestions on expanding their ideas. I've been in that position myself. So no, it's not a given that story-idea posters aren't interested in writing.

I and others here encourage posters to write their own tales because doing so is educational, fun, stimulating, and a better way to waste time than is watching TV. Nobody knows a story like its teller. If I write based on your idea, it'll be a different story. Writing a story blog-style is not difficult. The poster can certainly ignore our encouragement. But we'll keep trying to spread the contagion.