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[Porn_n_Poetry]

Is it insane that I can't sleep?
For thoughts of a person I've never met
Interrupt my slumber.

In 3 days
I've shared more
and made a deeper connection
than I've made with most in my life.

I'm sure it's lust;
An attraction to the new
and uncharted.

But does lust leave one
With butterflies
And doubts?
A trust for which
I cannot fathom a reason?

 

[flyguy69]

Is it insane that I can't sleep?
For thoughts of a person I've never met
Interrupt my slumber.

In 3 days
I've shared more
and made a deeper connection
than I've made with most in my life.

I'm sure it's lust;
An attraction to the new
and uncharted.

But does lust leave one
With butterflies
And doubts?
A trust for which
I cannot fathom a reason?

Are you looking for comments, PnP?

 

[annaswirls]

Is it insane that I can't sleep?
For thoughts of a person I've never met
Interrupt my slumber.

In 3 days
I've shared more
and made a deeper connection
than I've made with most in my life.

I'm sure it's lust;
An attraction to the new
and uncharted.

But does lust leave one
With butterflies
And doubts?
A trust for which
I cannot fathom a reason?

Hi Porn-n-Poetry,
Welcome and thanks for sharing your poem!
If you are looking for an answer then let me tell you mine, just know you are not alone in your flutter doubts trust lust and sleeplessness, it happens to the best of us, hold on to something solid, enjoy the ride, lose sleep but not perspective

free unsolicited cyberlove advice from a butterfly addict
and keep writing, it is a wonderful outlet!

pull up a chair and stay awhile,
~annaswirls

 

[Porn_n_Poetry]

Are you looking for comments, PnP?

Yes, and no.
I always like getting critiques on my work, but I really just needed a place to let this out! I've been a member at Lit for a while now, but I don't think I want a certain someone to see this.

 

[Porn_n_Poetry]

Hi Porn-n-Poetry,
Welcome and thanks for sharing your poem!
If you are looking for an answer then let me tell you mine, just know you are not alone in your flutter doubts trust lust and sleeplessness, it happens to the best of us, hold on to something solid, enjoy the ride, lose sleep but not perspective

free unsolicited cyberlove advice from a butterfly addict
and keep writing, it is a wonderful outlet!

pull up a chair and stay awhile,
~annaswirls

It feels so good, but makes me want to scream! I hope you enjoyed it and thank you!

 

[bogusbrig]

Yes, and no.
I always like getting critiques on my work, but I really just needed a place to let this out! I've been a member at Lit for a while now, but I don't think I want a certain someone to see this.

Don't forget that in a cyber relationship the other person isn't real, they are a projection of your own desires. Keep it all in perspective. People are only real once you meet them. Now it's just erotica by proxy.

 

[flyguy69]

Don't forget that in a cyber relationship the other person isn't real, they are a projection of your own desires. Keep it all in perspective. People are only real once you meet them. Now it's just erotica by proxy.

And ejaculating into an electrical outlet hurts. Trust me.

 

[annaswirls]

is it not the dream of man

Don't forget that in a cyber relationship the other person isn't real, they are a projection of your own desires. Keep it all in perspective. People are only real once you meet them. Now it's just erotica by proxy.

Hey I wrote a poem (or something like it) about this

(sheesh accepted 2 hours after I posted it here, Murphy is at it again)

 

[annaswirls]

And ejaculating into an electrical outlet hurts. Trust me.

oh but like John Mellencamp said
Hurts so good

 

[flyguy69]

That's good. Is it new?

Hey I wrote a poem (or something like it) about this

Subliminal Confession

She gets close enough to scoop you in her net,
and waits out the thrash and pulse
of the fight you never knew you had in you.

Tonight she will tell you anything
to lose this slipperiness
and find her way into you
on the back of pillow talk prophesy.

She seeps into your mind
and soaks up what you love
before twisting it to sex
so in her you see yourself
but in a frame of pussy
and tits and a welcoming mouth.

Oh god, is it not the dream of man,
to be able to fuck all the better parts of himself
without the threat of sharp edged mirrors?

 

[annaswirls]

That's good. Is it new?

it is newly edited, from one of those "all of a sudden what the fuck is she talking about passion suddenly" posts



I can't quite get it to say what I want it to say

 

[annaswirls]

kind of gives "go fuck yourself" a whole new meaning

 

[flyguy69]

kind of gives "go fuck yourself" a whole new meaning

Better that than an outlet.