thegibe
Really Really Experienced
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It's basically about one guy and three girls. The three girls are all extremely attractive, and the guy has fantasized about them his entire high school career, but never had one. I haven't thought of the names yet so I'll just give them generic names. One of the girls is rather sexually open ("Jane"), the second is somewhat but mostly not ("Lisa"), and the third is considered extremely "prude" ("Ginger"). The stories will detail how he manages to win them over until he finally has the foursome. I'd also like to note that this is all based off real people and (somewhat) events.
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I've got ideas for only a couple of the stories as of yets. Story one will consist of him getting hot and heavy with Jane. Pretty straightforward couple sex. He works up the nerve to invite her to homecoming... you see where this is going.
The second story will be of him getting Lisa story. The Lisa, Ginger and the guy of them are at Lisa's house after a game of some sort, in the hot tub. Jane and Ginger leave early to change, and after a little while, Lisa goes to change, and the guy "accidently" goes into her room.
In the third story, the three girls are having a sleep over. The guy lives nearby and Jane (the most sexually open one) calls him and invites him over. He climbs in through a window, and they proceed to have sex. Meanwhile, the "prude" girl, Ginger, hears, and spies on them. She finds herself turned on, and starts masturbating. The couple discusses how they both find they both find Ginger attractive, and the guy proposes that they go into her room where Jane can give him a handy while they watch Ginger. Ginger quickly gets back into bed, not sure what to do. The couple does this idea, but the guy gets carried away and cums on Ginger's face. Ginger acts angry and kicks them out of her house.
The fourth story will have Ginger and Lisa. Ginger will tell Lisa about what happened, and how she was really turned on but felt like she couldn't do anything. It turns into lesbian sex.
The fifth story will have Ginger lusting for the guy so much she finally invites him over and they have sex.
The sixth and final story will be the foursome.
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I'd like some feedback, especially ideas for names (but, come to think of it, I think I may keep Jane... but the other two should be different), and ideas for how the lesser fleshed out stories should go.
EDITS: Already I've seen some stuff to fix. 1) If Lisa has no part of the third story she doesn't need to be there. 2) Fifth story should probably have Jane in Lisa's place, since someone who's not very sexually open wouldn't offer lesbian sex, unless I made her very bisexually curious. My only problem in subsituting Jane for Lisa is that that would make it so Lisa has very little part at all.
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I've got ideas for only a couple of the stories as of yets. Story one will consist of him getting hot and heavy with Jane. Pretty straightforward couple sex. He works up the nerve to invite her to homecoming... you see where this is going.
The second story will be of him getting Lisa story. The Lisa, Ginger and the guy of them are at Lisa's house after a game of some sort, in the hot tub. Jane and Ginger leave early to change, and after a little while, Lisa goes to change, and the guy "accidently" goes into her room.
In the third story, the three girls are having a sleep over. The guy lives nearby and Jane (the most sexually open one) calls him and invites him over. He climbs in through a window, and they proceed to have sex. Meanwhile, the "prude" girl, Ginger, hears, and spies on them. She finds herself turned on, and starts masturbating. The couple discusses how they both find they both find Ginger attractive, and the guy proposes that they go into her room where Jane can give him a handy while they watch Ginger. Ginger quickly gets back into bed, not sure what to do. The couple does this idea, but the guy gets carried away and cums on Ginger's face. Ginger acts angry and kicks them out of her house.
The fourth story will have Ginger and Lisa. Ginger will tell Lisa about what happened, and how she was really turned on but felt like she couldn't do anything. It turns into lesbian sex.
The fifth story will have Ginger lusting for the guy so much she finally invites him over and they have sex.
The sixth and final story will be the foursome.
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I'd like some feedback, especially ideas for names (but, come to think of it, I think I may keep Jane... but the other two should be different), and ideas for how the lesser fleshed out stories should go.
EDITS: Already I've seen some stuff to fix. 1) If Lisa has no part of the third story she doesn't need to be there. 2) Fifth story should probably have Jane in Lisa's place, since someone who's not very sexually open wouldn't offer lesbian sex, unless I made her very bisexually curious. My only problem in subsituting Jane for Lisa is that that would make it so Lisa has very little part at all.
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