davion2308
Motivated
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- Dec 24, 2005
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Can anyone please give me some feedback and tell me what I did wrong on this story? I usually hit 4.2-4.5 in my stories, except the two loving wives stories I wrote.
I think my new one's okay, it's nothing fancy but the score is way down. Maybe I just am used to doing better then 4.0 and mid-3s are bad? Or does it really suck?
Feedback would be nice, thanks!
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=505224
I think my new one's okay, it's nothing fancy but the score is way down. Maybe I just am used to doing better then 4.0 and mid-3s are bad? Or does it really suck?
Feedback would be nice, thanks!
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=505224