I'm throwing in the towel with Loving Wives

davion2308

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Can anyone please give me some feedback and tell me what I did wrong on this story? I usually hit 4.2-4.5 in my stories, except the two loving wives stories I wrote.

I think my new one's okay, it's nothing fancy but the score is way down. Maybe I just am used to doing better then 4.0 and mid-3s are bad? Or does it really suck?

Feedback would be nice, thanks!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=505224
 
I don't even have to look to tell you why the scores are down:

Loving Wives.

Stories in the category will almost always score lower than your average by a fair margin. The place is a warzone of reader "camps" that believe their type of stories are the only kind that belong in the category, and vote 1 on anything that doesn't meet their criteria en masse.

Odds are, it has nothing at all to do with your writing and everything to do with the category.
 
Loving Wives is where the big boys play. But if you can't stand the heat you better get out of the ...

Owlwhisper numbers from a couple of years ago:


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And since then LW scores have gone down: In the last 30 days the median LW score is about 3.60
 
It seems like all of the median scores have been going down of late. Maybe the site is doing more stringent sweeping?
 
I wonder what the median age is of LW readers? I'm 58 and enjoyed it.
 
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