I'm so excited!

[mjl2010]

This morning I looked and my story has two views on it. It's been zero up until now.

This is a good sign finally?


<bouncing in his seat> MJL

 

[Gi_Venus]

This morning I looked and my story has two views on it. It's been zero up until now.

This is a good sign finally?


<bouncing in his seat> MJL

smiling congrats MJL. I have yet to get mine submitted....sigh! too many technical flaws.

 

[cloudy]

smiling congrats MJL. I have yet to get mine submitted....sigh! too many technical flaws.

That's what editors are for. If you'd like me to take a look at it, I'd be glad to.

mjl2010: yes, it's a good sign. It still may be a few days before it posts, but at least you know that its submission went through.

 

[Gi_Venus]

That's what editors are for. If you'd like me to take a look at it, I'd be glad to.


Thank you cloudy, I am flattered and honored by your offer.
laughing...I do not blame the LIT, before I could not understand why it was rejected...recently I pulled my story out and found some obvious flaws..and barely got started......sigh....and...I am not proud of it.....I mean the story is enjoyeable but....it is of a lustful nature and really is not me anymore....in other words.....needs total rewrite before I would be happy with it.
I would love to have you look at it when I am finished

 

[cloudy]

I would love to have you look at it when I am finished

sure thing.

 

[Guest]

...
and i just can't hide it
i know
i know
i know
i want you
i want you


sorry but the title begs.

 

[minsue]

...
and i just can't hide it
i know
i know
i know
i want you
i want you


sorry but the title begs.

Damn you, Vella-la!

 

[Guest]

Damn you, Vella-la!

what is it you always do?

oh yeah..


..

 

[minsue]

what is it you always do?

oh yeah..


..

You forgot the spaces...it's more aesthetically pleasing with them.

. .

 

[Guest]

You forgot the spaces...it's more aesthetically pleasing with them.

. .

SNOB!

 

[damppanties]

This morning I looked and my story has two views on it. It's been zero up until now.

This is a good sign finally?


<bouncing in his seat> MJL

Two? Did you say two views?

Oh dear...!

 

[Vermilion]

Two? Did you say two views?

Oh dear...!

hee hee *snerk*
Stop teasing the newbie Min
xx
V

 

[damppanties]

hee hee *snerk*
Stop teasing the newbie Min
xx
V

ahem.

It's nice to be thought of as the gosling.

 

[minsue]

ahem.

It's nice to be thought of as the gosling.

I know I'm flattered....

 

[Vermilion]

<blush>
<pouts and sulks>
I'm going to blame people who keep changing their Av. It confuses blondes.

x
V

 

[damppanties]

I know I'm flattered....

You're too sweet.

 

[damppanties]

<blush>
<pouts and sulks>
I'm going to blame people who keep changing their Av. It confuses blondes.

x
V

Don't worry. It was a very lovely mistake.

 

[minsue]

<blush>
<pouts and sulks>
I'm going to blame people who keep changing their Av. It confuses blondes.

x
V

Happens all the time, AV confusion. I'm not usually so lucky as to be confused with Dampy. No worries.

 

[damppanties]

Happens all the time, AV confusion. I'm not usually so lucky as to be confused with Dampy. No worries.

*looks at wilted flowers heart and wonders if it looks like sunset 'what the heck is that goose wearing' av*

 

[cloudy]

Happens all the time, AV confusion. I'm not usually so lucky as to be confused with Dampy. No worries.

Min, what is that goose doing/wearing in your AV?

 

[minsue]

Min, what is that goose doing/wearing in your AV?

It's a clown. Don't ask. I understand what it means and that's all that matters.

 

[Vermilion]

it's not that i confused a goose in fancydress with a bunch of dead flowers, I just saw a new Av and accidentally attached the wrong name to it.

x
V

 

[damppanties]

It's a clown. Don't ask. I understand what it means and that's all that matters.

pssst... it doesn't have a red tomato on its nose.. er... beak.

V, I was just playing with you. Sorry.

 

[minsue]

pssst... it doesn't have a red tomato on its nose.. er... beak.

V, I was just playing with you. Sorry.

It's too hard to talk that way.

 

[damppanties]

It's too hard to talk that way.

Paint the beak red. Or pink, and waddle into Abstrustions.