I'm so excited! BRAG BRAG BRAG!

[Gilly Bean]

I bit the big one, and finally wrote a story for Lit. It got posted this weekend. Please read it and let me know if you like???


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25637

 

[Shy Tall Guy]

Gilly,

You write extremely well! I speed read through your story and I liked it very much, but I personally needed a bit more steamy sex. It was a very romantic story with a bit of eroticism thrown in, and I wish more of the erotic stories would be as well written and romantic.

But how about a second story where they wake up and have hot steamy and explicit sex? A little more spice would be good - just don't loose what you started there okay?

 

[miz_understood]

A very nice story Gilly

 

[Gilly Bean]

Thank you both!

It will be continued on, hopefully with a few stories, but I want to hold off on the actual sex for a bit.

For starters, I am not at all comfortable writing that way yet. I just feel weird trying to type that up.

 

[Shy Tall Guy]

Thank you both!

It will be continued on, hopefully with a few stories, but I want to hold off on the actual sex for a bit.

For starters, I am not at all comfortable writing that way yet. I just feel weird trying to type that up.

Let it out - but don't fake it. Telling that part of the story will be liberating and empowering as long as it is your real feelings and not faked to please others.

You made a good start - I like the eroticism I saw there, but felt that it needed more. Of course if that is not your intention to take the story there because you have a different vision, then ignore me - but don't hold back if that is what you really want - your talent is too good to be denied.

 

[Gilly Bean]

Quick update...

I started the next installment already tonight, and it should be done soon. I hope it will be uploaded tonight, but tomorrow at the latest, and it should be up for your reading pleasure in a day or two.


Thanks again for all the great votes I am recieving, and all the feedback.

 

[Gilly Bean]

Part two was posted today, the link is:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25898


Hope you enjoy.

 

[Guru]

 

[Lord Emu]

That is an increadble story and I look forward to being able to read any new work of yours.

 

[Shy Tall Guy]

Part two was posted today, the link is:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25898


Hope you enjoy.

Even better than the first - one small little grammar/tense mistake; "She smiles at him before swiping at the feather in his hand." - "smiles" should be "smiled" (hey, in another life I proof read docs all the time).

Very good - have you thought of writing a erotic romance novels?You would be good at it. We could use Myst's lingerie shots for the cover artwork

 

[Gilly Bean]

Thank you

Thank you everyone.

GillyBeanBaby was made cause I didn't realize I could use Gilly Bean. It just kept telling me it was already a registered name. Talk about a blond moment.

 

[HARDKOREBJ]

STORY

you are very good at writting.

 

[Mz_Scarlett]

Very good - have you thought of writing a erotic romance novels?You would be good at it. We could use Myst's lingerie shots for the cover artwork

I agree 100%!

I loved the stories Gilly and I am looking forward to more installments!!

 

[Phoenyx]

Very nice.. Very nice..

 

[Guest]

ahem. usually when someone puts something about their stories on this board, you all usually jump on them to take it to the story discussion board or the author's hangout. so why should this be any different? she should take this thread over there, where it belongs. just because she is a *regular* doesn't mean that you should not tell her what i know you are thinking.

the stories are very good, though. nice work, gilly bean.

 

[Gilly Bean]

Thank you again. No, I have never really thought of writing wrotic novels. Hell, before these two, never really thought of writing erotic short stories. Me hubby convinced me to try finally, and voila!

Anyway, thank you very much for the encouragment, it means alot to me.

 

[Shy Tall Guy]

ahem. usually when someone puts something about their stories on this board, you all usually jump on them to take it to the story discussion board or the author's hangout. so why should this be any different? she should take this thread over there, where it belongs. just because she is a *regular* doesn't mean that you should not tell her what i know you are thinking.

the stories are very good, though. nice work, gilly bean.

AHEM!

Usually when someone posts unregistered it means they don't have the cajones to back up what they say by letting people know who they are. In this case I think that is true; if you have a complaint, valid or not, have the balls to post under your real name. I would not have had a problem with what you said (although I disagree) if you had the balls to post with your own name.

As for GB's posting here - I don't mind as long as it doesn't become a regular thing with everybody posting their sotries, and feedback, etc. Sure the other section is where you would normally see these kinds of posts, but I don't think we have to be so anal that we can't give a regular a little slack and encouragement.

Personally, I don't frequent tmost other sections, so the occasional mention of someones first story is not a bad thing in my view. I do get awful tired of people acting like trolls, even when what they say is said in a relatively nice way.

 

[Nathon_88]

All hail, the new good author!

*bows down and throws roses at Gilly*

Great stories.

 

[Guest]

I would post under my registered name if I had one, but I don't so I stated my opinions calmly, and in a non-troll like way. Some people actually post as unregistered because we, surprise surprise, are not really registered.. yet. I'm debating actually getting a real, registered name, but for now this will do. I was not rude to Gilly Bean; I even complimented her stories because they deserve the praise. There are some unregistered's floating around who don't abuse it, you know. hmmph.

 

[Shy Tall Guy]

I would post under my registered name if I had one, but I don't so I stated my opinions calmly, and in a non-troll like way. Some people actually post as unregistered because we, surprise surprise, are not really registered.. yet. I'm debating actually getting a real, registered name, but for now this will do. I was not rude to Gilly Bean; I even complimented her stories because they deserve the praise. There are some unregistered's floating around who don't abuse it, you know. hmmph.

Sorry! Unregistered posters trigger that Troll response in me quite easily.

I guess, since it is so easy to register, and to do it anonymously, I don't understand why people would choose to post unregistered if they weren't trolling - so I assumed you were hiding your identity.

Go ahead, register - it doesn't cost anything, and IIRC it doesn't ask for much more than that you be of age, a nom de plume and a password. I forget, but I don't think an email addy is necessary, but even if it is, go to yahoo and make one.