I'm posting some stories

[Dragonlipz]

and I'd like some feedback. These stories are a revision of a novel I wrote years ago. There's more sex and violence in the story now.....I originally wrote this as some kind of tour de force but eventually realized that it was pulp trash pure and simple.
It was neglected on my hard drive for years until I decided that there were aspects of the story that needed to be told.....the series is called the Vera Chronicles and I really would appreciate some feedback - I don't care if it's positive or negative as long as it's real.
Thanx DragonLipz

 

[starrkers]

The best way to get feedback is to post a link to your stories. We're a notoriously lazy mob in here