I'm picky. Are you the one for me?

[Submissioness]

First of all, I want to thank all of you who volunteer your time to help edit the stories of the Literotica authors. You don't get near enough credit sometimes.

I'm looking for an editor who is serious about creating magic with me.

I think my stories are strong. I'm not a professional, but I put a lot of time and thought into loading my stories with emotion and passion.

I need someone who can
A. Spot grammar mistakes
B. Critic and make creative suggestions to enhance the story
C. Help me see my stories thought the eyes of my readers

I enjoy in depth discussions about my stories and the issues that I present.

My favorite categories to write are First Time, Reluctance/Non-Consent and Erotic Coupling. I want to work with someone who also has a decent amount of interest in these categories also.

 

[renthead29]

I'd love to check out what you've got. I do quite a bit of writing myself, and i'd be happy to critique your work. Let me know if your interested

I love the subjects too

 

[Submissioness]

Hello there. That was quick. lol. Alright, my story that I was wanting to be edited first was actually just accpeted and posted tonight. But I still want to get someone to take a look at it. I haven't had a single word of feedback on it yet. It's called TheRapist in the Reluctance/Non-Consent category. You can find it listed with my other stories on my profile. It isn't posted to the category yet. What type of Instant Messenger do you use?

 

[renthead29]

well, i've just read Chelseas 18th...the first one, and you've got great form. You don't give a bunch of characterization away in the first few paragraphs in bullet notes like some people do, you give it throughout the story, so you come away feeling like you know them, and that's pretty hard to do. in general, you spoke nicely from both angles and it was a great ending. Can't wait to read the others!

 

[renthead29]

finished the rest of the stories...and only found one typo. Vein vs. Vain. You said Vein...you wanted Vain...but otherwise, the rapist was a great story.

the chelsea stories are ok to stand alone...i don't think you need them to be read in sequence or even together to get storyline, which is good. all in all, you're a really good author, i really enjoyed the stories

 

[Submissioness]

Thanks very much for the compliments. It's great if there are no constructive criticisms but if there are I'd love to hear them. So far my public comments say "if this kind of thing turns you on you're one sick dude." even though I'm a woman. And people who done like reluctance shouldn't read reluctance, much less comment on it.

Anyway, anyone else want to takes look? I'm open to serious criticisms.

 

[_Lynn_]

Thanks very much for the compliments. It's great if there are no constructive criticisms but if there are I'd love to hear them. So far my public comments say "if this kind of thing turns you on you're one sick dude." even though I'm a woman. And people who done like reluctance shouldn't read reluctance, much less comment on it.

Anyway, anyone else want to takes look? I'm open to serious criticisms.

Adding a link to the stories will help those of us that are lazy.

 

[Submissioness]

I would put links but I'm on my iPhone and I can't.

 

[evanslily]

Here ya go.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=944302&page=submissions

 

[Submissioness]

You're awesome! Thanks!

 

[Submissioness]

Thank you to everyone who considered editing my work and those who offered feedback. I think I've found who I'm looking for but if any of you would still like to give me feedback or suggestions, I'd really love that.

Thanks! Submissioness