Hey, guys. I'm a new writer here. I'm BBB771, the author of "The Secret Life of Chub" story. I'm wanting some feedback on my story currently. If you want to discuss any literary elements of the story, please, feel free to do so.
I'm trying my hand out at Gay Male literature, but I do enjoy writing heterosexual versions elsewhere. I want to get better at my writing, in general, so I'm learning how to become a better author right now. I love constructive criticism, and I think about my feedback very deeply.
I think this site is a good way to release my feelings into my artwork. I've dealt with homosexual feelings throughout my whole life. I never acted on my feelings towards guys, but I focused on women to try to feel normal. However, I feel that I'm bisexual. Anyways, I chose to bring these feelings out on the page. I don't want negative feedback on me personally, as far as bisexuality. I would prefer critiques on my writing style, content (including if I turn my readers on), sentence structure, and etc.
Any input would be greatly appreciated, guys.
BBB771
I'm trying my hand out at Gay Male literature, but I do enjoy writing heterosexual versions elsewhere. I want to get better at my writing, in general, so I'm learning how to become a better author right now. I love constructive criticism, and I think about my feedback very deeply.
I think this site is a good way to release my feelings into my artwork. I've dealt with homosexual feelings throughout my whole life. I never acted on my feelings towards guys, but I focused on women to try to feel normal. However, I feel that I'm bisexual. Anyways, I chose to bring these feelings out on the page. I don't want negative feedback on me personally, as far as bisexuality. I would prefer critiques on my writing style, content (including if I turn my readers on), sentence structure, and etc.
Any input would be greatly appreciated, guys.
BBB771
