Hello. I am a long time reader of Literotica and enjoy stories in the areas of bdsm, group sex... hmmm.... Maybe I should just say that I don't enjoy stories in the areas of Erotic Horror and Transsexuals & Crossdressers. That was much easier!
I have looked through the volunteer editors pages at length and e-mailed 2 who have not yet responded. It's been over a week for both. I'm trying to be patient! I am hoping that someone will be willing to take the time to review my story with me. I have checked and rechecked spelling, grammar (to the best of my ability) and believe that the story line makes sense but would really love it if someone would take a look at it.
I am willing to learn and would love to grow in this area of writing. I have lots of fantasies flitting around inside of my head and would like to find someone willing to help me bind them up into nice little packages that we could call stories. My first story is finished. I've entitled it "Taken and Used". It is just two pages long in a Word document. Here's the first few paragraphs:
"It’s been a long time since I’ve had my release. Oh, sure, I’ve had many orgasms and have been well fucked on a few occasions but the release I need is of a different kind. Some might call it a darker side and others… well, just sick. Personally, I have yet to find someone who calls it good.
Let me start by telling you a bit about myself. I’m 44 and a divorced mother of two teens. I live with a man who has been a long time friend and boyfriend. Let's call him Joe. I am a heavy woman. Not overly fat but I certainly have rolls across my middle. I don’t consider myself pretty but I don’t think I’m that difficult to look at either. I like my boobs. 42D’s. They do sag a bit but I love the way they can make me feel and the attention that they bring my way. I have a fat ass and thick thighs. My pussy lips are fat. My bush is usually kept trimmed. At work I am the “Boss Lady” but outside of work I crave to be the submissive one.
Joe and I have dabbled into a bit of bondage and some s/m play with me on the receiving end. A typical playtime will consist of me being tied to the bed with a vibrator strapped to my pussy while he plays with my boobs and nipples. He may make me suck his cock. If I’m really lucky he’ll tie my boobs up with rope so that they stand straight up and become red and tender. It is amazing how wet I become should he decide to smack them with a crop or strap. It is wonderful! Both of us like it when he takes me from behind. I especially like it when he tells me to turn over and then forces my face into the bed smashing my still tied up boobs into the mattress. Sometimes he’ll smack my ass while I’m in that position. It never lasts quite long enough though. When he fucks me real hard this way his balls swing forward and bang against my clit. Doing this will usually send me over the edge and when my contracting pussy muscles begin squeezing his cock that will usually send him off. After he’s recovered he will undo my ties, give me a quick kiss and run off to the bathroom leaving me sitting on the bed wondering, and wishing that there was more. These thoughts usually make me feel quite selfish."
So, if you think you'd like to help me out with this, please e-mail me at my user name minus the numbers @ comcast.net. I am an e-mail slut and check it as often as I possibly can. I cannot access my account while at work but will reply to your e-mail within the day/night. Thank you for considering this and I am excited and looking forward to working with you.
Be well!
Miroby61
I have looked through the volunteer editors pages at length and e-mailed 2 who have not yet responded. It's been over a week for both. I'm trying to be patient! I am hoping that someone will be willing to take the time to review my story with me. I have checked and rechecked spelling, grammar (to the best of my ability) and believe that the story line makes sense but would really love it if someone would take a look at it.
I am willing to learn and would love to grow in this area of writing. I have lots of fantasies flitting around inside of my head and would like to find someone willing to help me bind them up into nice little packages that we could call stories. My first story is finished. I've entitled it "Taken and Used". It is just two pages long in a Word document. Here's the first few paragraphs:
"It’s been a long time since I’ve had my release. Oh, sure, I’ve had many orgasms and have been well fucked on a few occasions but the release I need is of a different kind. Some might call it a darker side and others… well, just sick. Personally, I have yet to find someone who calls it good.
Let me start by telling you a bit about myself. I’m 44 and a divorced mother of two teens. I live with a man who has been a long time friend and boyfriend. Let's call him Joe. I am a heavy woman. Not overly fat but I certainly have rolls across my middle. I don’t consider myself pretty but I don’t think I’m that difficult to look at either. I like my boobs. 42D’s. They do sag a bit but I love the way they can make me feel and the attention that they bring my way. I have a fat ass and thick thighs. My pussy lips are fat. My bush is usually kept trimmed. At work I am the “Boss Lady” but outside of work I crave to be the submissive one.
Joe and I have dabbled into a bit of bondage and some s/m play with me on the receiving end. A typical playtime will consist of me being tied to the bed with a vibrator strapped to my pussy while he plays with my boobs and nipples. He may make me suck his cock. If I’m really lucky he’ll tie my boobs up with rope so that they stand straight up and become red and tender. It is amazing how wet I become should he decide to smack them with a crop or strap. It is wonderful! Both of us like it when he takes me from behind. I especially like it when he tells me to turn over and then forces my face into the bed smashing my still tied up boobs into the mattress. Sometimes he’ll smack my ass while I’m in that position. It never lasts quite long enough though. When he fucks me real hard this way his balls swing forward and bang against my clit. Doing this will usually send me over the edge and when my contracting pussy muscles begin squeezing his cock that will usually send him off. After he’s recovered he will undo my ties, give me a quick kiss and run off to the bathroom leaving me sitting on the bed wondering, and wishing that there was more. These thoughts usually make me feel quite selfish."
So, if you think you'd like to help me out with this, please e-mail me at my user name minus the numbers @ comcast.net. I am an e-mail slut and check it as often as I possibly can. I cannot access my account while at work but will reply to your e-mail within the day/night. Thank you for considering this and I am excited and looking forward to working with you.
Be well!
Miroby61
