I'm Looking For An Editor Please.

Slappy101

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Hi, I go by the name of Slappy.

A little about myself and my writing:

I'm just a senior in highschool, only 18, but I've been writing since a young age. Mostly fantasy, fiction, war, romance, that kind of thing. At around 13 or 14 I started playing massive multiplayer online games such as Diablo and Diablo II. This is where I was introduced to RPing, both sexual and non-sexual. From there I went on to write more, and I joined a few forums where I participated in both annually scheduled, and randomly created RPs and became a valued member, posting in about four or five RPs for a while. That sort of died down and I just started writing and finding my style.

In school I was always a very good writer, when it came to letters, projects, essays, or stories, I nearly always got A's, nothing less than a B. Sadly, my school stopped sponsoring a Creative Writing class which I wished to particpate in and it's too late to start it up seeing as I'm leaving soon.

I think my biggest problem is describing the surroundings, and at times I ramble when I don't mean to. I've gotten much better in my opinion, btu I could use some help. I'm always up for constructive criticism, and always ask for it on anything I write. However, my friends are too nice to be honest, and nobody at Literotica.com has given me any useful feedback.

I applied to a few editors lately who have yet to give me a response, so I'm looking here. If you want to see some of my work, look in the Celebrities setion at Ciara Ch. 01 and Ciara Ch. 02. Both of these stories, or installments, have gotten pretty good feedback in my opinion, votewise anyway. Only one comment, and it was a good comment. So take a look and let me know what you think. These were both untouched by an editor.

Erotica Writing Interests:

So far I've only written Celebrity and would like to do more in that section. I've yet to write a third Ciara installment, because I'm waiting for a bit of feedback and an editor. Plus a little inspiration. Right now, however, I'm starting on a non-Celebrity story that I'm unsure of the category.

Some categories I'm interested in writing for are: Celebrities, Anal, Lesbian, Fetish, First Time, Masturbation, Group, and just normal one-on-one sex (not sure of the classification).

I would like a female editor, but a male would be fine. Someone experienced, and most of all, literate. I say female, because I am a male and a lot of my writing contains female feelings. I do my best to capture these feelings, emotions, and actions, but of course, I'm not a female.

So please, anyone who thinks they'd like to help, or can help, let me know, via PM. (Not sure if I'm allowed to post and e-mail address here.)

Thank you,
- Slappy

PS. Sorry if this is posted in the wrong place.
 
Slappy101 said:
Hi, I go by the name of Slappy.

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PS. Sorry if this is posted in the wrong place.


Nope, you posted at the right place.
Now I wish you all the luck in finding the perfect editor for you. :)
 
Ok if you promise you are 18 and the story does not include any underage sexual encounters I will see if I can be of help to you.
 
Yeah, 18, and all are 18. I'm not done with my latest story, but should be pretty soon. Where would I reach you? Or just post it here?
 
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You sound like I would have if the internet was available when I was your age. I whacked off in the cellar while writing dirty stories, then burned them in the incinerator.

I'm a decent editor, enough to get your stories posted on Lit. But better yet, I can help you write them, if you want. I'm a teacher. I'm used to working with people. I'm less concerned with this story and more with you learning from it.

The choice is yours.

AS

Slappy101 said:
Hi, I go by the name of Slappy.

A little about myself and my writing:

I'm just a senior in highschool, only 18, but I've been writing since a young age. Mostly fantasy, fiction, war, romance, that kind of thing. At around 13 or 14 I started playing massive multiplayer online games such as Diablo and Diablo II. This is where I was introduced to RPing, both sexual and non-sexual. From there I went on to write more, and I joined a few forums where I participated in both annually scheduled, and randomly created RPs and became a valued member, posting in about four or five RPs for a while. That sort of died down and I just started writing and finding my style.

In school I was always a very good writer, when it came to letters, projects, essays, or stories, I nearly always got A's, nothing less than a B. Sadly, my school stopped sponsoring a Creative Writing class which I wished to particpate in and it's too late to start it up seeing as I'm leaving soon.

I think my biggest problem is describing the surroundings, and at times I ramble when I don't mean to. I've gotten much better in my opinion, btu I could use some help. I'm always up for constructive criticism, and always ask for it on anything I write. However, my friends are too nice to be honest, and nobody at Literotica.com has given me any useful feedback.

I applied to a few editors lately who have yet to give me a response, so I'm looking here. If you want to see some of my work, look in the Celebrities setion at Ciara Ch. 01 and Ciara Ch. 02. Both of these stories, or installments, have gotten pretty good feedback in my opinion, votewise anyway. Only one comment, and it was a good comment. So take a look and let me know what you think. These were both untouched by an editor.

Erotica Writing Interests:

So far I've only written Celebrity and would like to do more in that section. I've yet to write a third Ciara installment, because I'm waiting for a bit of feedback and an editor. Plus a little inspiration. Right now, however, I'm starting on a non-Celebrity story that I'm unsure of the category.

Some categories I'm interested in writing for are: Celebrities, Anal, Lesbian, Fetish, First Time, Masturbation, Group, and just normal one-on-one sex (not sure of the classification).

I would like a female editor, but a male would be fine. Someone experienced, and most of all, literate. I say female, because I am a male and a lot of my writing contains female feelings. I do my best to capture these feelings, emotions, and actions, but of course, I'm not a female.

So please, anyone who thinks they'd like to help, or can help, let me know, via PM. (Not sure if I'm allowed to post and e-mail address here.)

Thank you,
- Slappy

PS. Sorry if this is posted in the wrong place.
 
That sounds good Asylum, just let me know how to contact you and whatnot.

And Angel I'll send it as soon as I finish.

Thanks again.
 
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