I'm hitting a wall on where to go for part 3 of my series

[sound_afraid]

Hey all, I've written a 2 part series (my first "series") that has seemed to get pretty good ratings (Went from a 4.3ish for part 1 all the way up to a 4.8 for part 2), but I'm running into a brick wall on where to go with part 3. Do I introduce another character? Keep going with just the two I have? Do something different entirely? I'm honestly unsure and wanted to see if any of you had feedback.

https://literotica.com/s/the-panties-she-cant-take-off

https://literotica.com/s/the-panties-she-cant-take-off-ch-02

 

[THBGato]

He he... nice idea.

Could they try to find out where the panties came from? Who put them in her drawer? Introduce a plot element perhaps...

 

[StillStunned]

The panties have imps bound to them. They're what cause the orgasms. Once they've absorbed enough orgasms, they mature into full-grown sex demons.

Hey, if you're going to write in SF/F, be prepared to deal with demons.

 

[sound_afraid]

The panties have imps bound to them. They're what cause the orgasms. Once they've absorbed enough orgasms, they mature into full-grown sex demons.

Hey, if you're going to write in SF/F, be prepared to deal with demons.

Could always go that route! When it was in fetish the general feedback I got was this is fucking weird so I've moved it to SF/F and the feedback is much better.

I do like maintaining an element of mystery and "seduction" (if that's even the right word to use here) too but THBGato's suggestion could tie in as well.

 

[StillStunned]

If you want views: the person who sent the panties is Theresa's [father/brother/mother/sister], and they're jealous that Theresa has been experimenting with Jenny...

 

[sound_afraid]

He he... nice idea.

Could they try to find out where the panties came from? Who put them in her drawer? Introduce a plot element perhaps...

I'm glad you're intrigued! You've definitely moved me down the mystery/whodunit aspect, and also the aspect of where does Theresa stop? Is it at Jenny? Does she trap more people in her panty trap? Who exactly trapped her? I think those could all be a good starting point.. I've just got to keep fleshing out the plot element.

 

[ChuckWolf]

Maybe reveal why this is happening (ghosts?) or lay down some clues.

Perhaps the panties start doing their thing when Teresa is out in public (at work, a mall, out in a club with friends?).

 

[sound_afraid]

@THBGato @StillStunned I think I've figured out the route for part 3 and where this probably leads to.

Theresa receives a letter and another pair of panties with instructions on fitting them to her boss within 3 days, and failure means dire consequences.

We'll begin the slow burn of unraveling who is behind this while she works frantically to seduce her aloof, coldly professional boss into wearing them before time runs out.

I've started on the early part of this and it seems like a fun one!

 

[Britva415]

We'll begin the slow burn of unraveling who is behind this

Do you already know who it is?

 

[THBGato]

Had an idea for a plot twist - I've started a conversation with you.