Widow_C
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for an editor.
It's a 3200 word father/daughter story. It includes a first time experience and some golden moments. Lots of dialog (at least that's how it seemed when I was writing it). It takes place all in one night.
Basically it needs a title and comma and verb tense checks. I think everything else works but won't throw out suggestions in that respect either.
pm me if interested. It might even make a Valentine's submission with a little tweaking here and there.
It's a 3200 word father/daughter story. It includes a first time experience and some golden moments. Lots of dialog (at least that's how it seemed when I was writing it). It takes place all in one night.
Basically it needs a title and comma and verb tense checks. I think everything else works but won't throw out suggestions in that respect either.
pm me if interested. It might even make a Valentine's submission with a little tweaking here and there.
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