I'm a poet, didja know it?

[Guest]

Heheh... corny title, but hey!

I just got my first ever attempt at erotic poetry posted, and for a change of pace, I thought I'd give you all at taste of haiku leaves... that's japanese poetry writen in 5-8-5 beat style(?), and it's all done on the fly. No going back over and editing what's been put down.

Look here:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=9947

under "Six Haiku Leaves" and "Six More Haiku Leaves".

Feedback and votes are appreciated. Also please read and vote on my previously posted stories...I've got another one pending and a new one in the works! Should be some good stuff! ^_^

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[tigerjen]

Very very clever!

Very very clever haikus you got going!!
Very sweet, sexy, and sensual!

More haikus from you!


Tigerjen

 

[Guest]

Aww, is nothing really... just pure emotion given form in words. ^_^

Thanks Tigerjen! (BIG HUGS!) I appreciate the feedback, and yes there will be more to come...


Maintain and Check Six!

 

[tigerjen]

You're welcome!

Thank you for the big hugs!
I do look forward to more poems from you
in the future!

Tigerjen

 

[Rrrosyn]

Dukk,

Hi.

I am not very fond of haiku. (I think it is a 5,7,5 meter.) Something I have found much better to read than write.

I find myself more intrigued by your poetry, than anything else. I enjoyed it, just intrigued. Sorry for the lack of word here.

Have you considered something longer? Tanka, maybe?