I'm a novice! I'd love some feedback

[DanaGordon]

Hello beautiful world. I recently published my first story. It is celebrity-fan-fiction. I think it would be lovely if I could get some feedback and engage in some discussion about my first effort.

https://www.literotica.com/s/pams-empty-nest-ch-01

 

[lovecraft68]

Congrats on your first story and welcome to the boards.

This isn't the best place to put this though. There is a forum just for feedback here.

http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=1

Before you ask, you can't delete or move the thread, but I imagine the mod will do it for you at some point when he sees it.

Good luck with your writing.

 

[DanaGordon]

Thanks

Thanks for the info! No problem if this gets deleted. I posted it in the appropriate forum! Hope you have some time to check out the very short chapter!

 

[ThatsTheGuy]

Hello beautiful world. I recently published my first story. It is celebrity-fan-fiction.

https://www.literotica.com/s/pams-empty-nest-ch-01

Thank you. But really, I can't take all the credit. God and science had a lot to do with it. I've been tasked w/filling in the blanks.

CONGRATULATIONS!