illustration feedback

[DCrosby]

http://sonfathermother.blogspot.com/?zx=b08d6e8354d6d82b

shake it baby, shake it for me

 

[elfin_odalisque]

http://sonfathermother.blogspot.com/?zx=b08d6e8354d6d82b

shake it baby, shake it for me

Please, the rules of this site demand you give no links to other sites.

If you seriously want comments on your stories; post them on lit - or shove off.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Well known SPAMMER, Elle.

 

[DCrosby]

No im not a SPAMMER im just new to this. I put them on that blogsite, most have been taken off now though.
I mean, ive not had ANY feedback what so ever from this, the site ive posted wont hurt anyone.
and elfin, ive posted one or two around on the forum if yer interested, i also shoved it good and proper.

 

[kromen]

I couldn't get through the third sentence; it looked like one long sentence to me. Submit it to this site, with proper spacing, and I'll be happy to give it a go.