Illogical Feedback

[taurents]

I find I am receiving Feedback from " Anonymous " whenever I lodge a story which has words in the title indicating, shall we say, a "lady of easy virtue" The feedback is along the lines of reminding me of the hazards of unsafe sex . It is sad that "Anonymous" is exactly that as I would dearly love to enter into correspondence with him/her .

It is self evident that Anon does not appreciate the subtle differences between reality and fantasy . In real life of course I would always advocate safe sex, however in the realms of a FICTITIOUS erotic story having the hero and heroine suddenly down tools to slip on rubber gloves , mouth guards, pussy shields , condoms and assorted chemicals would I maintain result in a slight loss of spontaneity .

I concede that there may be some erotic value in describing a lady carefully and gently sliding a condom over Ruperts erect and glistening member , however I cannot see that having the same effect several times in one story and then repeated again in every other story on the site .

I realise that Anon is unlikely to check in here which is a shame as some kind of dialogue would be helpful on both sides but I wonder what the feelings of other readers and writers are .

 

[Whispersecret]

This anonymous person must be very busy, because I'd say that a great majority of the stories here do not mention the use of safety measures.

I agree, this is fantasy, for the most part, and while addition of realism is a good thing, the author has to make delicate decisions regarding what and what not to include. My aim is to write an engaging story, not a fable with an underlying moral. Just as it is healthier to eat a salad for lunch rather than fast food, I may not necessarily have my characters eat salad if having them chow down on a pizza is more in character.

 

[taurents]

I am tempted to write a story which will feature as the key element of the sex a detailed description of the safety preparations which even Anon would find acceptable but unless "Slut" or "Whore" appear in the title He/She is unlikely to read it , if they did they are unlikely to appreciate the satire intended and it would alienate REAL readers on this site

 

[Ray Dario]

You're not alone

It is good to see that I'm not the only one getting this person(s) feedback. To me it is usually stated simply like "Great, and then everyone died of aids" or some such blather!

Oh well, such is life.

Ray Dario

 

[DopeyAngel]

This is so unfair - I want somebody to tell me more about safe-sex, you know I haven't got a clue about contraception, I only know enough about sex to write about it!
Hmm, maybe it's 'durex' advertising policy?!

 

[VeraGem]

Time for SEFS?

I see such attitudes as a symptom of our current social disease. Since we're so fond creating names for every separate instance of someone acting stupid or like an asshole, I'll call the disease 'Somebody Else's Fault Syndrome,' or SEFS.

"I've got herpes," whines the guy to his psychotherapist, "but it's not my fault! It's the fault of that bitch I slept with - that, and I read so many stories on the Internet about gang bangs and no one got sick!"

"Here," says the 'doctor,' "take this little pill, you've got SEFS. You'll be feeling like you don't care about anything in about a week."

Please. We're writers, not health instructors. We try to provide an escape from reality; for our readers and for ourselves. If one is so stupid as to ignore the risks of Real Sex in the Real World with multiple partners one doesn't know or trust then my writing a condom over the john-thomas of my dashing hero isn't going to persuade anyone to use one. Not if they don't want to.

(Banging my head against the desk...)

Disclaimer: In no way am I advocating any kind of sexual activity that involves one or more persons actually touching, exchanging fluids, sharing Dixie cups, sticking needles in their eyeballs, using a blow dryer in the bathtub or spilling a hot beverage on their genitals.

I need a spanking.

 

[Hudson]

Maybe this is what anon would like to see.

Jim who had only just met the lady in waiting on a well swept corner of the street pulled from his pocket a set of sterelised tweasers, after removing the cling wrap from his penis he lifted it out of his newly dry cleaned trousers and waved it at the lady, she accepted his mating ritual and slipped her hand into her bag pulling out a container of windex which she sprayed over her naked lice free pussy wiping in circular motions as to make sure no std could have survived her cleansing ritual. Jim who now had noticed his dates cleanliness lit his bunson burner and melted a complete rubber tyre and poured it over his penis envoloping in its protective rubber sheaf, they both exchange medical certificates and well who is this anon loser, come out I say and let us all batter you with our imaginarey baseball bats, blah blah blah

 

[taurents]

HE/She strikes again : This message contains feedback for: taurents
About the submission: Jessica The Asian Slut
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Sorry hubby, do you dare fuck her now, she could have AIDS

*DO NOT hit the REPLY button to respond to this email.*

 

[taurents]

And here he is again :This message contains feedback for: taurents
About the submission: Maria
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

She really is SICK, she belongs in a mental institution, but AIDS will
get her real soon

Surely the owners of this site have some way of identifying this wierdo , its hardly conducive to encouraging contributions

 

[RussH]

Hey, Guys and Gals,

The only way to handle this type of annoyance is to chalk up one more in the "Read my Story" column, and go on about your daily business.

Sure, it's grating to have stuff like this in your e-mail box, but I guess we all have stuff in there we would like not to have. (at least, I sure do...)

The only responses you should worry about are those that have a name or return address attached.
For all others, you shouldn't mind, and they don't matter.

Russ - A reader that doesn't mind telling what I think, and who I am.

 

[Eve_of_destruction]

The only negative feedback I have ever received (including feedback about the "unsafe" sexual practices of my story characters) was written by Anonymous. For me to even consider taking their opinions seriously, he/she/they would have to respond to my stories using their online Lit names, otherwise... DELETE. Their feedback gets sent to the trashcan quicker than you can say "Another Jealous Critic".

 

[LOU123]

Love Good and bad feedback PLEASE? Thenks so MUCH

http://www.literotica.com/stories/s...ry.php?id=27140

 

[Catesby]

Laurents, I've had loads of anonymous feedback going on about AIDS. I've had these comments for 5 or 6 of the stories I've written under the names of Catesby and SallyJam. It really is bizarre, isn't it? The first one I had I was pretty shocked, and I'm still surprised that someone would bother.

Like your own, my stories tend to favour wives who are more "loving" than most. This really seems to send some people into a state of apoplectic anger. I don't know if it's bad personal experiences or just a complete lack of imagination.

Anyway, don't let it bother you. Just keep on writing. I have to say that I thought your latest one was superb.

 

[KinkyFreakyBi-girl]

wow that is crazy.

The Anon does realize this is an Erotic FICTION site, don't they? But in reality these are the same people who rent tons of gorry action movies and sex teen comedies so they can sit and write their congressman about the careless nature of Hollywood. For someone to seek oout all the stories on this site that do not contain safe sex and send anon feedback about AIDS is just a misguided fool with extreme issues of self importance. Better to delete it and never give it a second thought. Just like you would if someone you know saw Jurrasic Park and went on for hours about how making such a park would not just be imposible but would upset the entire ecological balance of our world, killing us all before we had the chance to even practice safe sex for the first time.

 

[captivate]

THE ANON CRITIC STRIKES AGAIN!

"The Downfall of Donna Reed, Chapter 6".

== Start comment ==

Way to go... soon you'll end up as a 10 dollar whore with AIDS

== End comment ==

Poor Donna, just as the fun was beginning, she is doomed! It did make me feel bad to have upset a faithful reader, now i see he/she is our own Jiminy Cricket and we should be grateful. I, for one, have seen the error of my ways and Donna will be joining a Nunnery as soon as she gets out of the damn dressing room. I can't thank you enough, Anon. Captivate

 

[Whispersecret]

I think someone should write a story that recklessly flaunts the non-safe aspect in Anon's face.

 

[taurents]

Nice idea, I can just imagine the scene , Mrs Anon bored with the constant use of creams and condoms offering herself up to her husbands favourite football team