I'll add to your thread or story

darrowhk

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...if you add to mine.

This may sound like a shameless plug for my story to some people, but on the contrary I find it to be keeping with the spirit of what I enjoy about chyoo. I like the interactivity, the give-and take of it. Maybe some of us have gotten too myopic, and are too focused on our own threads, and could use a challenge.

So here's the deal:

If you add a thread to my story, then post in this topic to let me know, I'll add to one of your stories (or threads, if you don't have a story of your own). I have only three conditions, which I promise to reciprocate:

1) Don't pull the story too far off into left field; unexpected things are ok, but if you're trying to point things in a new direction, do it slowly enough to keep the flow.

2) Minimum standards of quality, of course; I only mean the simple things: reasonably correct spelling/grammar/tense/perspective and a reasonable 2-3 paragraph length.

3) I don't really know if I could do incest stories. Sorry, I just don't feel up to it.

Here is my story:
http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/5607

I'd also like to encourage other authors to do the same- post your story and make add-to-mine-and-I'll-add-to-yours deals with people. Hell, if you like someone's writing enough, email them and offer a trade directly with them.
 
The premise of your story reminds me a little of Michael Manning's baroque and fantastic Japanese-influenced BDSM fetish graphic story works, like The Spider Garden. I wonder if development in that direction would work, or whether you want to keep it a little closer to realism.

-Z.
 
Like I said, as long as it goes off in another direction gracefully enough to not be jarring, it's all good.

Katsumi suddenly going super saiya-jin would be bad.
 
Thank you very much for writing. It's fine, Druuna needs an antagonist she can't just kill with a spiked baseball bat.
 
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