If you like nonconsent stories

[americandemon]

take a look at my aching for violation stories. Ch2 is in the new section. Oh and please vote. It's been a long time since I wrote anything and I'm not sure if I still have it. lol If I ever had it. So, if you get a chance take a look. Thanks.

Demon

 

[Lalah]

Here's a link to his submissions. Now that I went to the trouble of digging it up I find that I'm too lazy to invest more effort into reading it, but maybe it will help someone else.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=157026&page=submissions

 

[americandemon]

sorry

I'm really bad at computer stuff. Thanks for putting that ummm thing that takes people to my stories. Sorry for the trouble.

Demon

 

[Guest]

take a look at my aching for violation stories. Ch2 is in the new section. Oh and please vote. It's been a long time since I wrote anything and I'm not sure if I still have it. lol If I ever had it. So, if you get a chance take a look. Thanks.

Demon

It's a formulaic stroke story. Not bad, just not much in the way of substance.

I enjoy BDSM but non-consent is not really my thing.

You could work with an editor to help smooth out some things, proper use of quotation marks, the use of your instead of you're, some interesting descriptors (I don't believe "baby batter" should ever be in print), among other minor things.

It looks as if you have faithful readers so that's good.

Don't stop writing - keep on working.

 

[americandemon]

Thanks for the feedback

I don't claim to be a good writer. Hell, sometimes I feel I shouldn't be here at all. Yet I find myself here putting down stories. I think once I finish aching for violation ch03 I may be done with nonconsent stories. The 02 chapter is doing horrible!!! and I don't want to write horrible stories. I need a change. Oh well, thanks for replying to me and the feedback.

Demon