if you can see a sequel to stories

[lilguy]

here some of mind

Stone wood Mall- the aftermath I like to see her return maybe in another place. See what the guys and women that she played with are doing now. Is she still messing with him. What ever happen to that poor old man and his family or ice cream trick. Will this craze woman ever be arrested

Arron discover magic- have him a big mage now

Choice we make- lot of possibilties

 

[kendahl6969]

Re: sequels

Interesting idea for the Stone Wall Mall, lilguy. Though my idea for continuing "Lucy Takes a Holiday" isn't doing very well.

kendahl6969

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Problems with sequels

Hello,
I find the biggest problem on CHyoo with sequels is that before the first story is even half way developed the writer has created a follow up story. I would understand this is the original story had "Ending threads" where they ended the storyline. But I just don't see that. I think Chyoo has way too many half baked story ideas. They are stories that have no legs. The introduction should set up for the story to be able to grow. Many of the stories here might make 5 threads deep if they are lucky. I've noticed that some introductions are more like a scene rather than the begining of a story. I think Chyoo should have a section for "short stories". And in it include the stories Editors wish only to grow enough to complete them.

With the stories you mentioned like Stone Wall Mall for example... I am not sure where a part 2 would come from, as you are free to do EVERYTHING in the first story. The same goes for The Choices We Make, I could see a sperate story branching off with different characters that have appeared in the orginal. I see the same with Dacia's other story Summer Down Under. For that story I see Robyn and Emma a few years older and they reunit, after not seeing eachother for a couple years.

Right now you got me thinking Lilguy... A sequel for A College Girl to be... might be in order. The storyline that I wish to continue has already grown to 13 or 14 threads deep and to make that path longer might cause some great ideas to be lost. I have a thread I orginally had in mind to add to that path but it would work great as a seperate story. It takes place 3 years after the orginal story and has Sarah Banks attenting California Community College for criminal law. What's better than a high school girl? a college girl! Any thoughts?

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)

 

[lilguy]

damm your the king of plugs

thats why I like you man